From Across the Room Poetry Challenge Winners
The Vocal Team fell in love with nearly 3,500 poems submitted to the "From Across the Room" Challenge. These are the poems that judge Kirun Kapur loved the most.

From across the room (or rather, the screen), the Vocal Team fell head over heels in love with nearly 3,500 poems submitted to the Vocal+ “From Across The Room" Challenge. Inspired by the idea of love at first sight, the Vocal creative community once again delivered with heart and soul. After a month and a half of reading love poems, and with final judging by Kirun Kapur, esteemed editor of the Beloit Poetry Journal and creative writing professor at Amherst College, we are thrilled to announce our winners.
To all of the entrants, thank you for your thoughtful work. Remember, there’s always another Vocal Challenge around the corner! To the runners-up (listed at the end of this story), congratulations on your success! And, to our winners, you'll find Kirun Kapur’s thoughts on your award-winning work below:
The Winners
1st Place: "chartreuse" by Prinxe Danny | $2,500
& why does the silence
sound different
when i am with you?
With vivid language and spooling syntax, “chartreuse” paints a tender picture. It renders love, ink-stained and unraveling, somehow fresh and magical once again.
2nd Place: "Dance of the Unsquared Circles" by Lori Lamothe | $1,000
If you want me to love you
write a graffiti of rain-slick roads
across the Sahara of my distance
“Dance of Unsquared Circles” knows there must be salt in the sweet and anger in love. It’s energetic lines trace love’s sharp edges, turning the love poem inside out.
The Runners-Up
*Results are listed in no specific order*
- Romance is Dead by Tammy Castleman
- Never by Caitlin Cross
- Pietro by Joe Nasta
- #1 by S. A. Crawford
- At First Sight by Julie Allen
- Finally I See by Angel Whelan
- Teeth by Jennifer Parkhill
- Wayward Birds by Carly Bush
- Sapphire Serenity by Karissa E.L. Cuff
- God Damn I Want to Buy You Stuff by Eric Dovigi
- Love at Hindsight by The Aspens
- Love on a Screen by Lisa Gott
- The Colors of My Room by Karlie Steadman
- The Love Hermoine by Danielle Urciullo
- Like A Pricking Of The Skin by Nicole Stairs
- The Tube Ride by Kimberly Hinds
- Soundwaves by EJ Ferguson
- Letter to You on Our 20th Valentine's Day Together by Penny Fuller
- Fireflies by Cristina Pineros
- (Don't) Tell Me by Rachel Carey
- Here and Then by Ryan Smith
- March by Jonnie Walker
- In Bloom by ayvamitchell
- I Heard You First by Bugsy Watts
- Dream Weaver by Amy Walcker
- Allemande by Dane BH
- Anomaly. by Nagata.
- Stars by Jerica Floyd
- An Older Translation by Vivian R McInerny
- The Ballerina by Clara Clarke
- Quiet Love by Kiki Le Tigre
- When I saw you by Bibi Craig
- Falling in Love: SIDE A/SIDE B by Hala Numan
- Breathing is better with you by heyitsfye
- Empty Vases by Bella Leon
- the eyes have it by nathanael
- Love at First Write by Bianca Serraty
- Pragmatism by Zachary James
- Voyage by Sophie Colette
- mutual assuredness. by paisley
- What Does it Feel Like? by Teresa Renton
- Some Street in Philadelphia by Majique MiMi
- Paint me, love by Mei Lin
- Galaxy Collide by Britt Blomster
- you have to stop by Chloë J.
- Nights in Your Doorway by Rachel M.J
- Lady in Red by Crumbs
- Magic was a Cup of Water by Flora
- Marigold blossoming by Coalstream Poetry
- The Ruins by Ali SP
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