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Love at Hindsight

A true love story better than a fairytale

By Paul and Jordan AspenPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in From Across the Room Challenge

"It's a pity,"

I thought when I first saw you,

"that I couldn't possibly find you attractive

enough to date."


your roommate was dating mine

and I was all for the convenience of double dates

in theory...


I couldn't possibly

find you attractive enough to try and so



grew together slowly,

over empurpled poetry and private prose

and fireflies.


started falling in love

somewhere between the edge of nowhere and the house

where later we said

our vows.

The same house

where I had the pitiful thought that I couldn't

find you attractive.

The house

where poetry on the porch

and the legless bench and a crying baby all

helped me see


The house where

in hindsight love started growing way back

at first sight.

love poems

About the Creator

Paul and Jordan Aspen

Professionally, we help entrepreneurs get other people to sell for them through the power of social proof. Learn more at civanpro.com

Personally, we write... stories, poems, educational articles and more. Read more here on Vocal

Reader insights

Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

Top insights

  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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