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The Magic In A Bay Leaf
The Magic In A Bay Leaf I wrote a wish upon a leaf, A little hope, a small belief, I held it gently in my hand, And dreamed of things I couldn’t plan.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Some Hearts Lie
Some Hearts Lie Some hearts can promise you the sky, Then leave you wondering how and why, They speak of love, they speak so sweet, Then disappear when hearts must meet.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Am Still Here
Am Still Here I’ve walked through storms that left me cold, I’ve carried stories never told, I’ve known the nights that wouldn’t end, And wondered where I’d find a friend.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
The Woman sat in the empty chair
The Woman sat in the empty chair She sat there in the corner chair, laughing softly at the empty air. She argued with a teapot’s lid about the things the moon once hid.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Fame Overtook His Manners
Fame Overtook His Manners He started out with little fame, Just an ordinary man with an ordinary name, He smiled at strangers, stopped to care, And always had a moment to spare.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Advice needed from other Vocal writers On Vocal
Advice needed from other Vocal writers I have over 4,000 poems published on Vocal under Marie381uk, and I desperately want to make sure I have a safe backup of my work.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Upcoming Poetry Book
Upcoming Poetry Book Just thinking about it Might take time to write Trying to check if you like Hopefully in some way it will add some spice
By Christopher Beardabout a month ago in Poets
Camera Lights Smile
Camera Lights Smile Camera, lights, smile, Hold that pose and stay awhile, The flash goes off, the moment’s caught, A perfect picture, or so we thought.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
I Want to Know What This Love Is All About
I Want to Know What This Love Is All About I want to know what this love is all about, The kind that leaves no room for fear or doubt, The kind that wakes with laughter in the morning light, And holds you close beneath the stars at night.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Four Weddings and a Camera
Four Weddings and a Camera Four weddings and a camera, Four white dresses, four days of love, Four different stories beginning, With blessings whispered from above.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
The Camera Broke
The Camera Broke The camera broke on wedding day, Just as the bride was on her way, He pressed the button, nothing came, And suddenly nothing felt the same.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Never Photograph the Eclipse of Someone’s Heart
Never Photograph the Eclipse of Someone’s Heart Never photograph the eclipse of someone’s heart, For you may capture shadows tearing them apart, The camera sees the darkness crossing the light, But never knows what someone carries through the night.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets