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False Lovers Just for Show
False Lovers Just for Show They smile together for the crowd. They hold each other nice and proud. They kiss whenever people stare. But there is no true feeling there.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Who Gives A Toss
Who Gives A Toss Who gives a toss who’s called the boss. When workers always pay the cost. They work all day for little pay. Then still get told to work away.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
The Haunted Train
The Haunted Train The haunted train came through the night. It showed no sign and gave no light. I heard the wheels upon the track. But something told me not to look back.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
No Support from Vocal
All those reads in a month That’s lots great comments too On my writing vocal. 22,011 all time people likes That’s my Poetry it is
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
The Woman Who Stayed
The Woman Who Stayed She carried storms behind her eyes. Yet still she found a way to smile. The world had tested all her strength. She walked another weary mile.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Changes Are Here, Alien Interferences
Changes Are Here, Alien Interferences Something strange is happening, I can feel it in the air, The world keeps changing faster than we’re ready to prepare, Technology is talking while the satellites look down, And somewhere in the distance there’s a different kind of sound.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
With or Without You
With or Without You With or without you, morning still arrives, The sun still finds the window and the world still comes alive, The birds don’t know our story, the clouds don’t know our pain, And somehow every sunrise says that life begins again.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
I Blame It on the Teachers
I Blame It on the Teachers I blame it on the teachers who told me what was right, Who filled my head with questions and my notebooks full of life, They taught me how to read the words and how to make them rhyme, But never warned me love could steal your heart and waste your time.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Stonefruit
Skin soft, delicate, paper thin velvet burned by the sun. Flesh gold, honey ribboned, nectar dripping from every small cut
By Ellie Hoovsabout a month ago in Poets
He Was a Good Man
He Was a Good Man He never needed riches just to prove his worth, He carried quiet kindness from the moment of his birth, He’d stop to help a stranger when nobody else would stay, And somehow made the darkest room feel brighter in the day.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
When The Moon Knows Your Secrets
When The Moon Knows Your Secrets I whispered secrets to the moon, Beneath a lonely silver tune, I told her things I couldn’t say, Then watched the darkness fade away.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
The Magic In A Bay Leaf
The Magic In A Bay Leaf I wrote a wish upon a leaf, A little hope, a small belief, I held it gently in my hand, And dreamed of things I couldn’t plan.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets