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Upcoming Poetry Book Just thinking about it Might take time to write Trying to check if you like Hopefully in some way it will add some spice
By Christopher Beardabout a month ago in Poets
Camera Lights Smile
Camera Lights Smile Camera, lights, smile, Hold that pose and stay awhile, The flash goes off, the moment’s caught, A perfect picture, or so we thought.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
I Want to Know What This Love Is All About
I Want to Know What This Love Is All About I want to know what this love is all about, The kind that leaves no room for fear or doubt, The kind that wakes with laughter in the morning light, And holds you close beneath the stars at night.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Four Weddings and a Camera
Four Weddings and a Camera Four weddings and a camera, Four white dresses, four days of love, Four different stories beginning, With blessings whispered from above.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
The Camera Broke
The Camera Broke The camera broke on wedding day, Just as the bride was on her way, He pressed the button, nothing came, And suddenly nothing felt the same.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Never Photograph the Eclipse of Someone’s Heart
Never Photograph the Eclipse of Someone’s Heart Never photograph the eclipse of someone’s heart, For you may capture shadows tearing them apart, The camera sees the darkness crossing the light, But never knows what someone carries through the night.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
When the Lens Shattered the Eye Took Over
When the Lens Shattered the Eye Took Over When the lens shattered, The eye took over, No longer hidden behind glass, No longer looking through a frame.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
The Traveller Who Stole the Sand
The Traveller Who Stole the Sand He arrived beneath the desert sun, With nothing more than a little bag, Nobody knew where he had come from, Or why he walked beneath that flag.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
The Rose (poem 2)
The Enchanted Emerald Rose boxes Within a garden where the shadows sleep, A strange and precious rose begins to bloom, Its emerald petals secrets softly keep, While ruby edges chase away the gloom.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Husk
You swept into my life And stole all my nights That bled into years My greatest of fears Animated within A soulless husk Frankenstein At least Left his monster with a mob Where by the end Even our passion was an act Until you finally Blessedly Evaporated Leaving me alone with A blood-drained heart And a wine-stained bed
By Matthew J. Frommabout a month ago in Poets
The Eyes That Remember
The Eyes That Remember I found you staring through the page, With eyes that seemed to know my name. A silent face from somewhere else, Yet somehow nothing felt the same.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets
Love Is Whispered, Never Sold
Love Is Whispered, Never Sold Love is whispered, never sold. Never bought with hands of gold. It lives in truth, not grand display. Yet slips through careless hands away.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk about a month ago in Poets