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By ๐‘๐Œ ๐’๐ญ๐จ๐œ๐ค๐ญ๐จ๐งPublished 3 months ago โ€ข Updated 3 months ago โ€ข 5 min read
Top Story - March 2024
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Welcome to Write Club!

My friends, it is time we face the stark reality โ€“ that inconvenient little truth. You probably do not need me to tell you this, but we ALL have some serious issues! And man-oh-man do those issues make for some great creations! The Monsters beneath your beds were a delightful mix of funny, adorable, and downright terrifying.

Reading through these amazing creations reinforced what I already knew: I have stumbled upon a goldmine of dynamic talent here at Vocal. You all are truly remarkable!

There were a total of 33 submissions for this Unofficial Challenge. WOW! This collection of stories and poems comes from some of the most creative minds and talented writers not just on Vocal, but anywhere. This is professional quality for certain!

There is something for everyone within these submissions. I truly believe these should be compiled and published. They are honestly that good!

Selecting winners is extremely difficult. I am going to sort these into several categories: (1) Slimes & Rhymes (poems); (2) Casper and Friends (friendly scares); (3) Beastly Haunts (fiction); and (4) Skeletons in Your Closets.

I am awarding $5 for each and every Submission. You all did a bang-up job. I am truly in awe of your talent and creativity. This was more than I could have ever hoped for! Thank you!

(The system got angry at me for too many transactions all at once, so if you have not yet received your Tip, it is coming โ€” as soon as the โ€˜monster of stripe payโ€™ shuffles back under the bed!)

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Skeletons in Your Closets

Celia in Underland has set the bar high with her Top Story about a lingering โ€˜monster of guiltโ€™ with her Top Story, โ€œA Thousand Several Tonguesโ€.

Real Poetic also came hard and fast out of the gate with a moving poem about a โ€˜relationship monsterโ€™ who offered an empty promise of love in โ€œBogeymanโ€.

Natasha Collazo introduces us to the cuddly โ€˜monster of addictionโ€™ who needs to be fed in โ€œPet Sin.โ€

Stephanie Hoogstad introduces us to a familiar โ€˜monster of self-doubtโ€™ with her clever bedtime prayer: โ€œMonsters in the Nightโ€.

Donna Fox (HKB) presents an all-too-familiar โ€˜nagging monster of self-doubtโ€™, that little grammar policeman in her head waking her and urging her to edit her writing. Donnaโ€™s story, โ€œGo Awayโ€ is an incredibly well-told tale. No need to edit this one.

Hannah Moore introduces a lifetime of preserved memories, a โ€˜monster of relics pastโ€™ lurking beneath her bed with her clever story, โ€œAs I Lay me Down to Sleepโ€.

Mackenzie Davis presents her little beast, Ralph, a โ€˜monster in therapyโ€™ with a deeply layered short tale titled, โ€œAn Exercise in Receiving Kindnessโ€:

John Cox delivers a fantastic Top Story titled, โ€œThe Little Dreamerโ€, about a โ€˜monster of free willโ€™ and the conflicts that accompany it.

Rebekah Conard is escorted this evening by her โ€˜critical, nagging weekly monsterโ€™ that little voice inside her head, who, with no eyelids, sees and recalls all and is quick to point out every fault, whether real or perceived. Check out โ€œKeeping You Awakeโ€.

K. Stockton (my daughter) has submitted a powerful tale about her โ€˜lifelong monsterโ€™ companion, but, sadly, this monster is still being held captive by the all-too-real โ€˜monster of Vocal reviewโ€™! โ€œA Monster Under my Bedโ€ should appear here . . . eventually!

Slimes and Rhymes

Tommy Ballard has written a powerful poem about a โ€˜monster of obsession and self-doubtโ€™ that has haunted many of us in his poem titled, โ€œMaybe Somedayโ€.

Tommy Ballard has brought another frightening monster to the party with this heartbreaking poem about a sad โ€˜monster of loss and lonelinessโ€™ lurking beneath the bed in โ€œ=// nights \\=โ€.

Randy Baker has provided us with a very vivid description of a furious struggle with that nagging โ€˜monster of our pastsโ€™ in another brilliant poem, โ€œIt Lurks in Shadowsโ€.

Bonnie Bowerman joins the party, with her guest, โ€˜a shadowy monster of childhood fearโ€™ in this exquisitely written poem that captures the essence of childhood innocence and fear, โ€œThe Monster that Lives Under my Bedโ€.

Anna captures perfectly the fear of the โ€˜beastly monster beneath the bedโ€™ in her clever Ukiah (reverse Haiku: 7-5-7), โ€œTalk to Meโ€.

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden gives us a โ€˜surprise monsterโ€™ with a clever twist in her Seusslike poem, โ€œRougarou in Disguiseโ€.

Poppy offers us a โ€˜monster of emotional baggageโ€™ in her raw, visceral poem, โ€œFangs and Clawsโ€.

Mackenzie Davis gives us another deeply philosophical piece to chew on with her incredible poem, โ€œSay it's Goodnessโ€. This one describes a โ€˜monster of banishmentโ€™ and the consequences which follow.

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden gives us another spooky poem with perfect verse and rhyme, a warning of those โ€˜monsters of the nightโ€™ in this clever poem, โ€œBedtimeโ€.

J gives us โ€œMonsters Made of Sandโ€, a dark and intense Poe-like tale of a โ€˜monster beckoning from the depths belowโ€™:

Beastly Haunts

Cathy Holmes delivered an instant Top Story with this ingenious creation combining multiple Prompts/Challenges. Meet her โ€˜nightmarish monsterโ€™ calling out from the other side of her bed, in โ€œPostcard From the Graveโ€.

Novel Allen gives us a glimpse into a frightening โ€˜monster of night terrorsโ€™ stalking her sleep, in โ€œNight Terrorโ€.

Gerard DiLeo introduces us to a trio of monsters in this ghostly Dickens of a tale, but these are not the Ghosts of Past, Present and Future, but rather, the โ€˜monsters of Cooda, Wooda and Shoodaโ€™, in โ€œA Business Carolโ€.

Donna Fox (HKB)โ€™s imagination takes us on another frightful trip to meet the โ€˜monster lurking beneath her bedโ€™ in her vivid tale โ€œCan you Imagine?โ€

Catsidhe delivers another Top Story with a clever and humorous tale about a common โ€˜monster that even the monsters fearโ€™ with this fun story, โ€œWith Sharp Teeth and Clawsโ€.

Matthew Fromm delivers a real punch-to-the-gut story that is expertly crafted to reveal โ€˜a real monsterโ€™ from the pages of history with his must-read short story, โ€œThey Came from Belowโ€.

Casper and Friends

Rachel Deeming has invited a โ€˜guardian of dreamsโ€™ to the party with a beautiful story about the lovable monster, โ€œBarstable, the Night Warriorโ€.

D. J. Reddall has introduced a frightening โ€˜monster of angerโ€™ to the party. โ€œMy Borutaโ€ is a chilling tale of how we feed this hungry monster.

Anna brings a โ€˜monster of childhood dreamsโ€™ to this Monster Mash. โ€œNaive as a Childโ€ is a powerful coming-of-age tale of learning to defeat our fears.

David E. Perry gives us a delightful childhood โ€˜guardian of dreamsโ€™ with an incredibly well-penned tale โ€œPeanut and Tommyโ€.

Liam Storm is escorted by Greg, a โ€˜friendly monster reaching outโ€™ in a heartfelt letter in the clever story, โ€œThe Monster Under Your Bed?โ€

Accompanying Anna to the Monster Mash is a โ€˜monster of childhood innocence in her touching story, โ€œBelly and Mayaโ€:

David E. Perry followed up his earlier tale about โ€œPeanut and Tommyโ€, with a companion tale about โ€œHiss and Susanโ€. Enjoy this โ€˜Guardian of the Nightโ€™.

If I have somehow overlooked an Entry, please let me know!

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  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsden3 months ago

    This was such a fun prompt, congrats on the top story, it was so well deserved. Thank you for the shout-out and generous example

  • K. Stockton3 months ago

    My story finally got out of auto moderation hell and was published! I know it's a little late thanks to that, but you can find it here: https://vocal.media/psyche/a-monster-under-my-bed

  • Denise E Lindquist3 months ago

    Wow!! Congratulations on a well-deserved top story!๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰

  • ROCK 3 months ago

    I am reading all. I loved John Cox entry. Such a natural talent he is.

  • Shirley Belk3 months ago

    I didn't participate, but you have done a marvelous job of parenting a small world of creativity here! Thank you for this and congratulations!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽŠ

  • sleepy drafts3 months ago

    Wow!!! What an incredible selection - these really could be put together into a book. I've bookmarked this to come back to and read throughout the week - amazing work to all and huge congratulations to everyone (and yourself!) for such a successful challenge!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿป๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’—

  • LASZLO SLEZAK3 months ago

    Amazing work. Thanks,

  • Test3 months ago

    Bravo! Your hard work is paying offโ€”keep it up, congratulations!

  • Dana Crandell3 months ago

    I'm sorry I wasn't able to jump in on this one, but it's left me a great selection of reading material! I'll be jumping into that asap! Thanks for inspiring these, Rob and congratulations, everyone!

  • J3 months ago

    Thank you, R! This prompt was a great opportunity for digging into the subconscious and bringing things up to the surface, and brought a lot of awesome writers to the forefront of awareness as well. Pretty sweet deal. Congratulations, everyone!

  • Wooohooooo congratulations to everyone! ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽŠ Also, I've subscribed to your daughter! Can't wait to read her piece!

  • Test3 months ago

    Aw thank you so, so much Rob. For the prompt and the tip.Very much appreciated ๐Ÿค

  • Rebekah Conard3 months ago

    And it's only February! The tip is much appreciated, but if you keep it up you're gonna be broke by December. =P Looking forward to the next one!!

  • D. J. Reddall3 months ago

    Many thanks for the provocative prompt and your stunning generosity, granting each of us a reward for our efforts in spite of Stripe's shenanigans! No furious Boruta could be fed under such conditions: I am all gratitude, good sir.

  • Liam Storm3 months ago

    The amount of submissions just goes to show how good the prompt was! An amazing thing you're doing giving a tip to everyone! That means a lot to me as I'm sure it does to everyone else! I personally tried something new because of this challenge and rely enjoyed it, I'm glad you did too ๐Ÿ™Œ

  • Rachel Deeming3 months ago

    Well, that was a lovely surprise and unwarranted but generous. Thank you. I loved the artwork that you generated - without that, Barstable would not have come to light. Thank you for the challenge and the inspiration.

  • Anna 3 months ago

    Thank you so much for the challenge!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿซถ

  • Natasha Collazo3 months ago

    It was so fun partaking out n this. Prob my fav writing prompt yet ๐Ÿ™ƒ

  • Cathy holmes3 months ago

    Wow, Rob. Thank you so much. You are beyond generous and this was a great challenge.

  • Jay Kantor3 months ago

    Hi Rob - This is Terrific-didn't-know it Existed. We know who the Big Prize is going to, your K~Kid, if not don't bother going home tonight; we get that. It's so cool how you keep creating new wheels. Me, I could never write on demand. If I were a Journalist my 'Breaking News Report' would be a day late. j.in.l.a

  • Catsidhe3 months ago

    Amazing work putting everything together and an amazing prompt! Thank you for your work and your generosity!

  • Mackenzie Davis3 months ago

    You are a star, RM. Absolutely mind blowing work went into reading and categorizing the submissions and you went above and beyond in summarizing every single one. I can learn so much from how you run challenges. Bravo! I am so amazed that youโ€™re tipping $5 for every entry, like whatttt?! Youโ€™re an inspiration, my friend. Thank you very much.โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ Now I must read read read.

  • Real Poetic3 months ago

    Congrats to everyone!! And thanks Rob for hosting such an exciting challenge! โค๏ธ

  • Donna Fox (HKB)3 months ago

    Congrats to all the winners and thank you so much RM for running this challenge!! It was so much fun to compete and such a huge honour to win!!! This was so great and I can't wait to see what your next one looks like!!!

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