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Welcome to Write Club!
My friends, it is time we face the stark reality โ that inconvenient little truth. You probably do not need me to tell you this, but we ALL have some serious issues! And man-oh-man do those issues make for some great creations! The Monsters beneath your beds were a delightful mix of funny, adorable, and downright terrifying.
Reading through these amazing creations reinforced what I already knew: I have stumbled upon a goldmine of dynamic talent here at Vocal. You all are truly remarkable!
There were a total of 33 submissions for this Unofficial Challenge. WOW! This collection of stories and poems comes from some of the most creative minds and talented writers not just on Vocal, but anywhere. This is professional quality for certain!
There is something for everyone within these submissions. I truly believe these should be compiled and published. They are honestly that good!
Selecting winners is extremely difficult. I am going to sort these into several categories: (1) Slimes & Rhymes (poems); (2) Casper and Friends (friendly scares); (3) Beastly Haunts (fiction); and (4) Skeletons in Your Closets.
I am awarding $5 for each and every Submission. You all did a bang-up job. I am truly in awe of your talent and creativity. This was more than I could have ever hoped for! Thank you!
(The system got angry at me for too many transactions all at once, so if you have not yet received your Tip, it is coming โ as soon as the โmonster of stripe payโ shuffles back under the bed!)
Skeletons in Your Closets
Celia in Underland has set the bar high with her Top Story about a lingering โmonster of guiltโ with her Top Story, โA Thousand Several Tonguesโ.
Real Poetic also came hard and fast out of the gate with a moving poem about a โrelationship monsterโ who offered an empty promise of love in โBogeymanโ.
Natasha Collazo introduces us to the cuddly โmonster of addictionโ who needs to be fed in โPet Sin.โ
Stephanie Hoogstad introduces us to a familiar โmonster of self-doubtโ with her clever bedtime prayer: โMonsters in the Nightโ.
Donna Fox (HKB) presents an all-too-familiar โnagging monster of self-doubtโ, that little grammar policeman in her head waking her and urging her to edit her writing. Donnaโs story, โGo Awayโ is an incredibly well-told tale. No need to edit this one.
Hannah Moore introduces a lifetime of preserved memories, a โmonster of relics pastโ lurking beneath her bed with her clever story, โAs I Lay me Down to Sleepโ.
Mackenzie Davis presents her little beast, Ralph, a โmonster in therapyโ with a deeply layered short tale titled, โAn Exercise in Receiving Kindnessโ:
John Cox delivers a fantastic Top Story titled, โThe Little Dreamerโ, about a โmonster of free willโ and the conflicts that accompany it.
Rebekah Conard is escorted this evening by her โcritical, nagging weekly monsterโ that little voice inside her head, who, with no eyelids, sees and recalls all and is quick to point out every fault, whether real or perceived. Check out โKeeping You Awakeโ.
K. Stockton (my daughter) has submitted a powerful tale about her โlifelong monsterโ companion, but, sadly, this monster is still being held captive by the all-too-real โmonster of Vocal reviewโ! โA Monster Under my Bedโ should appear here . . . eventually!
Slimes and Rhymes
Tommy Ballard has written a powerful poem about a โmonster of obsession and self-doubtโ that has haunted many of us in his poem titled, โMaybe Somedayโ.
Tommy Ballard has brought another frightening monster to the party with this heartbreaking poem about a sad โmonster of loss and lonelinessโ lurking beneath the bed in โ=// nights \\=โ.
Randy Baker has provided us with a very vivid description of a furious struggle with that nagging โmonster of our pastsโ in another brilliant poem, โIt Lurks in Shadowsโ.
Bonnie Bowerman joins the party, with her guest, โa shadowy monster of childhood fearโ in this exquisitely written poem that captures the essence of childhood innocence and fear, โThe Monster that Lives Under my Bedโ.
Anna captures perfectly the fear of the โbeastly monster beneath the bedโ in her clever Ukiah (reverse Haiku: 7-5-7), โTalk to Meโ.
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden gives us a โsurprise monsterโ with a clever twist in her Seusslike poem, โRougarou in Disguiseโ.
Poppy offers us a โmonster of emotional baggageโ in her raw, visceral poem, โFangs and Clawsโ.
Mackenzie Davis gives us another deeply philosophical piece to chew on with her incredible poem, โSay it's Goodnessโ. This one describes a โmonster of banishmentโ and the consequences which follow.
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden gives us another spooky poem with perfect verse and rhyme, a warning of those โmonsters of the nightโ in this clever poem, โBedtimeโ.
J gives us โMonsters Made of Sandโ, a dark and intense Poe-like tale of a โmonster beckoning from the depths belowโ:
Beastly Haunts
Cathy Holmes delivered an instant Top Story with this ingenious creation combining multiple Prompts/Challenges. Meet her โnightmarish monsterโ calling out from the other side of her bed, in โPostcard From the Graveโ.
Novel Allen gives us a glimpse into a frightening โmonster of night terrorsโ stalking her sleep, in โNight Terrorโ.
Gerard DiLeo introduces us to a trio of monsters in this ghostly Dickens of a tale, but these are not the Ghosts of Past, Present and Future, but rather, the โmonsters of Cooda, Wooda and Shoodaโ, in โA Business Carolโ.
Donna Fox (HKB)โs imagination takes us on another frightful trip to meet the โmonster lurking beneath her bedโ in her vivid tale โCan you Imagine?โ
Catsidhe delivers another Top Story with a clever and humorous tale about a common โmonster that even the monsters fearโ with this fun story, โWith Sharp Teeth and Clawsโ.
Matthew Fromm delivers a real punch-to-the-gut story that is expertly crafted to reveal โa real monsterโ from the pages of history with his must-read short story, โThey Came from Belowโ.
Casper and Friends
Rachel Deeming has invited a โguardian of dreamsโ to the party with a beautiful story about the lovable monster, โBarstable, the Night Warriorโ.
D. J. Reddall has introduced a frightening โmonster of angerโ to the party. โMy Borutaโ is a chilling tale of how we feed this hungry monster.
Anna brings a โmonster of childhood dreamsโ to this Monster Mash. โNaive as a Childโ is a powerful coming-of-age tale of learning to defeat our fears.
David E. Perry gives us a delightful childhood โguardian of dreamsโ with an incredibly well-penned tale โPeanut and Tommyโ.
Liam Storm is escorted by Greg, a โfriendly monster reaching outโ in a heartfelt letter in the clever story, โThe Monster Under Your Bed?โ
Accompanying Anna to the Monster Mash is a โmonster of childhood innocence in her touching story, โBelly and Mayaโ:
David E. Perry followed up his earlier tale about โPeanut and Tommyโ, with a companion tale about โHiss and Susanโ. Enjoy this โGuardian of the Nightโ.
If I have somehow overlooked an Entry, please let me know!
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Comments (31)
This was such a fun prompt, congrats on the top story, it was so well deserved. Thank you for the shout-out and generous example
My story finally got out of auto moderation hell and was published! I know it's a little late thanks to that, but you can find it here: https://vocal.media/psyche/a-monster-under-my-bed
Wow!! Congratulations on a well-deserved top story!๐๐๐
I am reading all. I loved John Cox entry. Such a natural talent he is.
I didn't participate, but you have done a marvelous job of parenting a small world of creativity here! Thank you for this and congratulations!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Wow!!! What an incredible selection - these really could be put together into a book. I've bookmarked this to come back to and read throughout the week - amazing work to all and huge congratulations to everyone (and yourself!) for such a successful challenge!! ๐๐ป๐ช๐ป๐๐๐๐
Amazing work. Thanks,
Bravo! Your hard work is paying offโkeep it up, congratulations!
I'm sorry I wasn't able to jump in on this one, but it's left me a great selection of reading material! I'll be jumping into that asap! Thanks for inspiring these, Rob and congratulations, everyone!
Thank you, R! This prompt was a great opportunity for digging into the subconscious and bringing things up to the surface, and brought a lot of awesome writers to the forefront of awareness as well. Pretty sweet deal. Congratulations, everyone!
Wooohooooo congratulations to everyone! ๐๐๐๐๐๐ Also, I've subscribed to your daughter! Can't wait to read her piece!
Aw thank you so, so much Rob. For the prompt and the tip.Very much appreciated ๐ค
And it's only February! The tip is much appreciated, but if you keep it up you're gonna be broke by December. =P Looking forward to the next one!!
Many thanks for the provocative prompt and your stunning generosity, granting each of us a reward for our efforts in spite of Stripe's shenanigans! No furious Boruta could be fed under such conditions: I am all gratitude, good sir.
The amount of submissions just goes to show how good the prompt was! An amazing thing you're doing giving a tip to everyone! That means a lot to me as I'm sure it does to everyone else! I personally tried something new because of this challenge and rely enjoyed it, I'm glad you did too ๐
Well, that was a lovely surprise and unwarranted but generous. Thank you. I loved the artwork that you generated - without that, Barstable would not have come to light. Thank you for the challenge and the inspiration.
Thank you so much for the challenge!๐๐ซถ
It was so fun partaking out n this. Prob my fav writing prompt yet ๐
Wow, Rob. Thank you so much. You are beyond generous and this was a great challenge.
Hi Rob - This is Terrific-didn't-know it Existed. We know who the Big Prize is going to, your K~Kid, if not don't bother going home tonight; we get that. It's so cool how you keep creating new wheels. Me, I could never write on demand. If I were a Journalist my 'Breaking News Report' would be a day late. j.in.l.a
Amazing work putting everything together and an amazing prompt! Thank you for your work and your generosity!
You are a star, RM. Absolutely mind blowing work went into reading and categorizing the submissions and you went above and beyond in summarizing every single one. I can learn so much from how you run challenges. Bravo! I am so amazed that youโre tipping $5 for every entry, like whatttt?! Youโre an inspiration, my friend. Thank you very much.โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ Now I must read read read.
Congrats to everyone!! And thanks Rob for hosting such an exciting challenge! โค๏ธ
Congrats to all the winners and thank you so much RM for running this challenge!! It was so much fun to compete and such a huge honour to win!!! This was so great and I can't wait to see what your next one looks like!!!