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"Please don't look at me" I cried
"There's no escape..."
The beast responded "...just try!"
Written for RM Stockton's Unofficial Challenge:
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Oooo, this was so creepy and I'm attracted to that beast at the same time, lol! Loved your Haiku!
That is fun, Anna! You capture this brilliantly in a mere 19 syllables. FANTASTIC! Well done.
This is a spooky little poem! Great work!