Alone no more
Boldly walking together
Carrying each others burdens
Doting on one another
Each hold the other up
Fostering each others hopes
Guiding when the other is lost
Holding hands as we move forward
Inching ever nearer
Just you and me
Keeping our promise to each other
Love helping us go on
More than you ever know
Now and forever
Our love has no ends
Pray we stay together always
Que the kisses
Routing out the fear
Seeking only our true love
That lights our way
Under the influence of a love
Very happy together
Waltz with me
Xanthic nimbus surrounding us
You and me walking side by side
Zealously looking to our future
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I have noticed that in the professional sphere, as far as I have noticed, that many people choose to come to work, mainly with the intention of collecting a paycheck, which I completely understand, unfortunately, we all need money to survive in this world. I also feel very strongly about the fact that if you are going to work in a profession, you should certainly treat that profession, whatever it may be, with the dignity that its purpose entails, whether you are working in the medical field, or working at a fast food restaurant, you should do you best to do the best job you can, because when it comes right down to it, we are all humans, going through the trials, and challenges that this life can bring us, by working together.
By Kaylon Forsyth6 days ago in Humans
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Love the attempt to mix two challenges in one, and the strength of the love between these two people comes through clearly when reading. “Guiding when the other is lost Holding hands as we move forward” is lovely imagery, especially when combined with the picture😊
What a wonderful poem! This is definitely not an easy task to pull off, but you’ve done very well at it. Great job.
Wow. Great job on such a difficult task. Well done.
Have we been writing Inverse and not knowing it, I wonder. You doubled up nicely on this one MC. Alone no more together forever. Great premise.
You too? What was it that possessed us to try both at once?
Wow! Great work here!❤️😊💕
You are a poetic genius! This works so well both ways! Such a wonderful poem!
How romantic! Nice one. ☺️👏 I need to have a go. Not living up to my 2024 goals so far lol! 😁
Beautiful poem read either way, though both read in very similar fashion. In a reverse poem, the more differently they read, the better.
Wow MC, way to flex that poetry muscle!! I love the way you encapsulated two kind of poems in one and how seamlessly the piece flows!! Very well thought out and executed! Great emotional piece!
So romantic 🥰
absolutely beautiful. This is the way love should be.
Awesome!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
Aw MC so clever and beautifully done! Love the sentiment of this!🤍
Very nice.