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To The Point of It All

And making a point

By Oneg In The ArcticPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
To The Point of It All
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Ode to the Elbow

That always shoves its way

The corner of my body that

Cracks at dawn like

Bones that settled too comfortably in the grave

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Ode to the Elbow

That keeps things painful and funny

At the same time

Half crying, half laughing

About everything that’s hurting inside

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Ode to the Elbow

That sticks out of t-shirt sleeves

Saying “fuck you” to conformity

And being hidden behind the cotton veil

Because why hide such a sharp point

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Ode to the Elbow

Where yours intersects with mine

As we gracefully sway down the street

Intertwining in the mood of lamplit dusk

Linked together by so much emotion, memory, and even, by elbows

surreal poetry

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Oneg In The Arctic

A storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.

Co-founder of Queer Vocal Voices

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Comments (5)

  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock11 months ago

    Ode to the elbow & the weenus which covers it. Once a young friend asked if it was alright if she touched my weenus (proffering hers as she asked). For some reason, I did not hear the "w" at the beginning of the word, but distinctly something else. Now, it's just awkward.

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Ah!!! Perfect ode to the elbow!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Veronica Coldiron11 months ago

    I never thought much about my elbow unless I've whacked it on something, but this was magical! Loved this!!

  • Sheila L. Chingwa11 months ago

    whimsical

  • AWWWWW, this is spot on! Great job

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