Open Road
for Randy Baker's Prompted #5 (June 2024)
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yesterday the world closed its doors for a moment
nowhere was open
we took solace in the charm of home
found peace where we could
carving time out to watch the stars beneath blankets
listening to the rhythm and rhyme of time ticking by
together, you and I, alone
always in the same spot
night after night
.
with the slow passing of time
my microcosm quietly slipped into dusk
leaving me feeling lost amid the dead of isolation
.
life, once glorious,
no longer felt like a blank canvas
.
I longed for uncharted water
for navigating without a compass
marking new territories on the map
slicing through the wild world
catching waves, guided by
the unknown hue that marks the thrill of being alive,
knowing that
whatever lies ahead
is as glorious as the tranquil sea,
a sight of pure quietude,
the last great free expanse
heralding the best days are yet to come
.
this morning
we hopped on our bikes
heading toward destinations unknown
.
we embrace
the days ahead, knowing
that minuscule moment,
the pandemic,
no longer clouds our eyes
.
time is escaping us
and yes,
our days will end
but we know now,
having lived through that reckoning of sorts,
that while night
one day will leave us in her wake,
we have tools to handle whatever comes,
painful though it may be, we understand and accept
that gripping solitude
once again will claim us in our final hour
on this beautiful earth
.
but until then
the steadfast sun will light a new horizon
and I am yours, hand in hand,
free and alive to the very core of my being,
traveling with you wherever the open road takes us
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Copyright © 05/23/2024 by Christy Munson. All rights reserved.
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Author's Notes: Written for Randy Baker's unofficial challenge, Prompted #5. for June 2024. Requirements stipulate a minimum of 13 words across 12 lines.
Per the prompt's requirement to capture all the words used, here are the words I used in alphabetical order (I think I used them all except whisps): Ahead, Beneath, Canvas, Carving, Catching, Charm, Clouds, Compass, Days, Dead, Destinations, Dusk, Embrace, End, Escaping, Expanse, Free, Glides, Glorious, Guided, Heralding, Home, Horizon, Hue, Isolation, Leaving, Light, Marking, Marks, Microcosm, Minuscule, Moment, Navigating, Night , Nowhere, Open, Passing, Peace, Quietly, Quietude, Reckoning, Rhyme, Sea, Sight, Slicing, Solace, Spot, Stars, Steadfast, Sun, Tranquil, Time, Tools, Uncharted, Unknown, Wake, Water, Waves, Wild, World, Yesterday
61 prompt words across 51 lines.
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Christy Munson
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Comments (17)
Lovely flow of words. Quite impressive with the amount of word prompts used. One of the best ones I read for this challenge.
How have I not read this until now?? This is amazing! There's such a sense of wanderlust in this poem that captures so many emotions so well!
Wow! Lots of words used, but such nostalgia in the moments. Well crafted.
I love this. Unbelievably creative
Amazing work!
A wonderful piece about love and the open road of existence!
Wow, Christy! All out and well-done
It felt so sophisticated! I loved your poem a lot!<3
All except whisps?! Outstanding!
Impressive use of so many words into a coherent narrative poem! And not a single line felt remotely contrived! Great work, Christy!
I was thinking... This is me in the pandemic...and then...
Beautifully written! ❤️
Excellent work. Nownim off to check out the prompt.
How in the actual hell did you do this???? Whoaaaa, you freaking blew my mind!!! You used soooo many words!! If you don't win, I'd be severely disappointed!
Well done on it.
Fabulous!!! Love it!!!💕❤️❤️
It amazes that in spite of the artificial constraint of 51 words selected by someone else that you manage to craft a poem this beautiful and meaningful.