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Open Road

for Randy Baker's Prompted #5 (June 2024)

By Christy MunsonPublished 24 days ago Updated 24 days ago 2 min read
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yesterday the world closed its doors for a moment

nowhere was open

we took solace in the charm of home

found peace where we could

carving time out to watch the stars beneath blankets

listening to the rhythm and rhyme of time ticking by

together, you and I, alone

always in the same spot

night after night

.

with the slow passing of time

my microcosm quietly slipped into dusk

leaving me feeling lost amid the dead of isolation

.

life, once glorious,

no longer felt like a blank canvas

.

I longed for uncharted water

for navigating without a compass

marking new territories on the map

slicing through the wild world

catching waves, guided by

the unknown hue that marks the thrill of being alive,

knowing that

whatever lies ahead

is as glorious as the tranquil sea,

a sight of pure quietude,

the last great free expanse

heralding the best days are yet to come

.

this morning

we hopped on our bikes

heading toward destinations unknown

.

we embrace

the days ahead, knowing

that minuscule moment,

the pandemic,

no longer clouds our eyes

.

time is escaping us

and yes,

our days will end

but we know now,

having lived through that reckoning of sorts,

that while night

one day will leave us in her wake,

we have tools to handle whatever comes,

painful though it may be, we understand and accept

that gripping solitude

once again will claim us in our final hour

on this beautiful earth

.

but until then

the steadfast sun will light a new horizon

and I am yours, hand in hand,

free and alive to the very core of my being,

traveling with you wherever the open road takes us

__________

Copyright © 05/23/2024 by Christy Munson. All rights reserved.

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Author's Notes: Written for Randy Baker's unofficial challenge, Prompted #5. for June 2024. Requirements stipulate a minimum of 13 words across 12 lines.

Per the prompt's requirement to capture all the words used, here are the words I used in alphabetical order (I think I used them all except whisps): Ahead, Beneath, Canvas, Carving, Catching, Charm, Clouds, Compass, Days, Dead, Destinations, Dusk, Embrace, End, Escaping, Expanse, Free, Glides, Glorious, Guided, Heralding, Home, Horizon, Hue, Isolation, Leaving, Light, Marking, Marks, Microcosm, Minuscule, Moment, Navigating, Night , Nowhere, Open, Passing, Peace, Quietly, Quietude, Reckoning, Rhyme, Sea, Sight, Slicing, Solace, Spot, Stars, Steadfast, Sun, Tranquil, Time, Tools, Uncharted, Unknown, Wake, Water, Waves, Wild, World, Yesterday

61 prompt words across 51 lines.

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  • Lamar Wigginsabout 12 hours ago

    Lovely flow of words. Quite impressive with the amount of word prompts used. One of the best ones I read for this challenge.

  • M. A. Mehan 17 days ago

    How have I not read this until now?? This is amazing! There's such a sense of wanderlust in this poem that captures so many emotions so well!

  • Novel Allen19 days ago

    Wow! Lots of words used, but such nostalgia in the moments. Well crafted.

  • I love this. Unbelievably creative

  • Shaun Walters20 days ago

    Amazing work!

  • Patrick M. Ohana20 days ago

    A wonderful piece about love and the open road of existence!

  • Shirley Belk22 days ago

    Wow, Christy! All out and well-done

  • Anna 23 days ago

    It felt so sophisticated! I loved your poem a lot!<3

  • D. J. Reddall23 days ago

    All except whisps?! Outstanding!

  • D.K. Shepard23 days ago

    Impressive use of so many words into a coherent narrative poem! And not a single line felt remotely contrived! Great work, Christy!

  • Hannah Moore23 days ago

    I was thinking... This is me in the pandemic...and then...

  • Belle23 days ago

    Beautifully written! ❤️

  • Cathy holmes23 days ago

    Excellent work. Nownim off to check out the prompt.

  • How in the actual hell did you do this???? Whoaaaa, you freaking blew my mind!!! You used soooo many words!! If you don't win, I'd be severely disappointed!

  • Well done on it.

  • Babs Iverson24 days ago

    Fabulous!!! Love it!!!💕❤️❤️

  • John Cox24 days ago

    It amazes that in spite of the artificial constraint of 51 words selected by someone else that you manage to craft a poem this beautiful and meaningful.

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