Tie Me To The Kite String But Don’t Let Me Go
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This poem is part of a special Mental Health collaborative series by the Saloon For Writers on Facebook.
You can find more of the poems from this series here. Poem 1 by Oredolapo A Roberts | Poem 2 by Angela Derscha | Poem 3 by Sofia Duarte | Poem 5 by Talia Devora
Sometimes it’s the getting used to the empty
The empty space beside
The empty space inside
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Sometimes it’s the lack of touch
To acknowledge my existence
To avoid the sensation of floating
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Floating by
Floating away
Far far away
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Sometimes it all goes by
Blink of an eye
Time passes without the need to try
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And where am I then
Somewhere new or
Still stuck in the sand
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Maybe it’s the tingling sensation
The confirmation of presence
At least there’s something to feel
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So I trace the edges of my teeth
Tongue tracing corners
Looking for more than decay
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Just suffocate me with sage
So I may cleanse the numbness
and breathe a little lighter tomorrow
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Sometimes we can be surrounded by people and still feel lonely. Sometimes we can be both lonely and alone at the same time. I wrote this poem shortly after my great grandmother passed. There were also 3 newborn deaths in the community I live in. It was a time of loneliness and being alone. My fiancé was physically still in another country, and as much as technology brings us together- sometimes you just feel so far away.
It’s important to make space for these feelings, to help start processing. It’s how we begin to become grounded, so we don’t float too far away.
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Oneg In The Arctic
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