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The Third Eye
The Third Eye I grew an eye where silence lives, right in the middle of all I hide. It does not blink at pretty lies, it opens wide when truth walks by.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk 19 days ago in Poets
MEET BIRDY BIRD
MEET BIRDY BIRD Birdy Bird was born quite odd, he never learnt to fly, he sat beneath a watching tree and argued with the sky.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk 19 days ago in Poets
Decay
I sit at the edge of the room Faded voices, laughter I used to join in That was before, this is after After, the split between
By Raine Fielder19 days ago in Poets
Different standards for different people. Content Warning.
Have you ever noticed that standards differ depending on your status and gender? The higher your status, the less the law touches you.
By Jen Phillips19 days ago in Poets
TRUTH
TRUTH Truth stared straight into my eyes, it never blinked or turned away, I tried to hide behind myself, but truth had something else to say.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk 19 days ago in Poets
THE BRIDE HE LEFT BEHIND
THE BRIDE HE LEFT BEHIND She waited dressed in ivory, With flowers in her hand, She thought she heard his footsteps, But silence filled the land.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk 19 days ago in Poets
BROKEN BY LOVE
BROKEN BY LOVE You came into my darkness And promised me the sun, You said my lonely searching Was finally over and done.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk 20 days ago in Poets
I kissed the flame
I kissed the flame i knew that you were danger the first time that we met, a fire dressed in kindness i never could forget.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk 20 days ago in Poets
THIS WORLD
THIS WORLD This world wakes up each morning And paints a smiling face, But underneath the colours There hides a darker place.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk 20 days ago in Poets
Drawn like a moth to the flame
Drawn like a moth to the flame you waited in the darkness and called me without sound, a flame among the shadows where lonely hearts are found.
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk 20 days ago in Poets
The Locksmith’s Teeth. Top Story - May 2025.
The Locksmith’s Teeth They buried him deep with a padlock grin, The locksmith born with keys for skin. He spoke in clicks, in twists of brass,
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk 20 days ago in Poets
Vocal Turning Cold & Haiku
I don’t know why, but my likes and reads are all down. 😢 It seems people aren’t reading my poetry anymore. What did I do? If I offended anyone, poop. 💩 Three likes showed up two days ago? All stats are down. What’s going on? Either it’s time to give up or buy shares in Vocal and see if that gets popularity. Maybe the chosen ones do have shares, ha ha. Sixty-million-dollar question solved, lol. Seriously, where have you all gone? Come back, please. It’s lonely here in Verbal Woods. 😊
By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk 21 days ago in Poets