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Have you seen Juliet...

Relinquishing the one who is food for your Liveliness can put your spirit insufficiency.

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 12 months ago β€’ Updated 11 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - May 2023
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Have you seen Juliet...
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I can smell

Her fragrance

Being carried out in

The wind...

Tangible sensations

Creep into my mind...

I felt your kiss,

And now I miss your lips...

You brought upon a

Blaze in my heart...

Who would've thought

We'd be apart...

Misconceptions

Turned into

Separation

But I treasure

Your memories...

I lack your vitality.

Could you love me again?

Will this be the end?

A love story starts off

So beautiful,

Only to have a tragic destiny...

I've searched my life

For Juliet...

Losing her was the

One thing that I

Truly regret!

I Inscribed,

A warrior by far

But a lover in my Heart.β€οΈπŸ“

I feel like a Juliet Series Could Be Coming Along, but I could be wrong πŸ‘€...

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • Alex H Mittelman 7 months ago

    Fantastic poem! Love it!

  • Test12 months ago

    Fantastic, Lonzo! I absolutely love this. Congratulations on being Top Story πŸ’•πŸ™‚πŸ€—

  • Silent Scarlett12 months ago

    Love poetry

  • Leslie Writes12 months ago

    πŸ’–πŸ‘

  • Real Poetic12 months ago

    Yes!! Love your words. πŸ‘πŸΌ

  • Mark Gagnon12 months ago

    I've never been a poetry person but if I were, this would be in my top ten must-reads. Congrats on TS

  • sleepy drafts12 months ago

    I am loving your Juliet series so far! 😍

  • Cathy holmes12 months ago

    Yay. Congrats on the TS

  • Marilyn Glover12 months ago

    I feel like a Juliet series is an excellent idea, and I think many readers will second my opinion! πŸ˜‰

  • So many lines I could quote. But I choose you: "Misconceptions/Turned into/Separation". Oh how perceptions, assumptions, and lack of asking questions do relationships in. Simply lovely and well crafted. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • I would fight for thy love, but I have neither the necessary weapons nor tools, deeds nor words.

  • Gina C.12 months ago

    Sooo beautifully done, Lonzo! πŸ₯Ήβ€οΈ But I expected nothing less - congrats on Top Story!! 😍😍

  • Emily Binkley12 months ago

    Very beautiful β™₯️

  • Mackenzie Davis12 months ago

    Just lovely! And congratulations!! πŸŽ‰

  • The Dani Writer12 months ago

    Beautiful sentiment! Congratulations on achieving a Top Story with this poem!

  • Test12 months ago

    Congrats πŸͺ

  • Heather Hubler12 months ago

    Beautifully done. You have a wonderful way with words :) Congratulations on Top Story!!

  • Novel Allen12 months ago

    Another love story gone wrong. Life happening.

  • JBaz12 months ago

    Once again a beautiful read. Congratulations

  • Roy Stevens12 months ago

    Fantastic! Congratulations Lonzo πŸŽ‰βœ¨πŸŽ‡πŸŽ†β—πŸ’–

  • Tiffany Gordon 12 months ago

    gorgeous work! Congrats on your Top Story! Very well deserved! I stan this series! 😍

  • Sandra Tena Cole12 months ago

    I would totally love a Juliet series!! πŸ’”β€οΈx

  • Cindy Calder12 months ago

    I love this so much!

  • Abdulsamad12 months ago

    Great poem

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