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Have you seen Juliet...

Relinquishing the one who is food for your Liveliness can put your spirit insufficiency.

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 17 days ago โ€ข Updated 11 days ago โ€ข 1 min read
Have you seen Juliet...
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I can smell

Her fragrance

Being carried out in

The wind...

Tangible sensations

Creep into my mind...

I felt your kiss,

And now I miss your lips...

You brought upon a

Blaze in my heart...

Who would've thought

We'd be apart...


Turned into


But I treasure

Your memories...

I lack your vitality.

Could you love me again?

Will this be the end?

A love story starts off

So beautiful,

Only to have a tragic destiny...

I've searched my life

For Juliet...

Losing her was the

One thing that I

Truly regret!

I Inscribed,

A warrior by far

But a lover in my Heart.โค๏ธ๐Ÿ“

I feel like a Juliet Series Could Be Coming Along, but I could be wrong ๐Ÿ‘€...

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • Harmony Kent8 days ago

    Fantastic, Lonzo! I absolutely love this. Congratulations on being Top Story ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿค—

  • Silent Scarlett11 days ago

    Love poetry

  • Leslie Writes13 days ago


  • Real Poetic13 days ago

    Yes!! Love your words. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

  • Mark Gagnon15 days ago

    I've never been a poetry person but if I were, this would be in my top ten must-reads. Congrats on TS

  • sleepy drafts15 days ago

    I am loving your Juliet series so far! ๐Ÿ˜

  • Cathy holmes16 days ago

    Yay. Congrats on the TS

  • Marilyn Glover16 days ago

    I feel like a Juliet series is an excellent idea, and I think many readers will second my opinion! ๐Ÿ˜‰

  • So many lines I could quote. But I choose you: "Misconceptions/Turned into/Separation". Oh how perceptions, assumptions, and lack of asking questions do relationships in. Simply lovely and well crafted. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • I would fight for thy love, but I have neither the necessary weapons nor tools, deeds nor words.

  • Gina C.16 days ago

    Sooo beautifully done, Lonzo! ๐Ÿฅนโค๏ธ But I expected nothing less - congrats on Top Story!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

  • Emily Binkley16 days ago

    Very beautiful โ™ฅ๏ธ

  • Mackenzie Davis16 days ago

    Just lovely! And congratulations!! ๐ŸŽ‰

  • The Dani Writer16 days ago

    Beautiful sentiment! Congratulations on achieving a Top Story with this poem!

  • Heather Hubler16 days ago

    Beautifully done. You have a wonderful way with words :) Congratulations on Top Story!!

  • Novel Allen16 days ago

    Another love story gone wrong. Life happening.

  • JBaz16 days ago

    Once again a beautiful read. Congratulations

  • Roy Stevens16 days ago

    Fantastic! Congratulations Lonzo ๐ŸŽ‰โœจ๐ŸŽ‡๐ŸŽ†โ—๐Ÿ’–

  • Tiffany Gordon 16 days ago

    gorgeous work! Congrats on your Top Story! Very well deserved! I stan this series! ๐Ÿ˜

  • Sandra Tena Cole16 days ago

    I would totally love a Juliet series!! ๐Ÿ’”โค๏ธx

  • Cindy Calder16 days ago

    I love this so much!

  • Ayan khan16 days ago

    Oo my God great Poem mind blowingโ€™

  • Congratulations on top story!!!

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