Have you seen Juliet...
Relinquishing the one who is food for your Liveliness can put your spirit insufficiency.
I can smell
Her fragrance
Being carried out in
The wind...
Tangible sensations
Creep into my mind...
I felt your kiss,
And now I miss your lips...
You brought upon a
Blaze in my heart...
Who would've thought
We'd be apart...
Misconceptions
Turned into
Separation
But I treasure
Your memories...
I lack your vitality.
Could you love me again?
Will this be the end?
A love story starts off
So beautiful,
Only to have a tragic destiny...
I've searched my life
For Juliet...
Losing her was the
One thing that I
Truly regret!
I Inscribed,
A warrior by far
But a lover in my Heart.❤️📝
I feel like a Juliet Series Could Be Coming Along, but I could be wrong 👀...
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Comments (43)
Fantastic poem! Love it!
well done loved the poem.
Fantastic, Lonzo! I absolutely love this. Congratulations on being Top Story 💕🙂🤗
Love poetry
💖👏
Yes!! Love your words. 👏🏼
I've never been a poetry person but if I were, this would be in my top ten must-reads. Congrats on TS
I am loving your Juliet series so far! 😍
Yay. Congrats on the TS
I feel like a Juliet series is an excellent idea, and I think many readers will second my opinion! 😉
So many lines I could quote. But I choose you: "Misconceptions/Turned into/Separation". Oh how perceptions, assumptions, and lack of asking questions do relationships in. Simply lovely and well crafted. Congratulations on Top Story!
I would fight for thy love, but I have neither the necessary weapons nor tools, deeds nor words.
Sooo beautifully done, Lonzo! 🥹❤️ But I expected nothing less - congrats on Top Story!! 😍😍
Very beautiful ♥️
Just lovely! And congratulations!! 🎉
Beautiful sentiment! Congratulations on achieving a Top Story with this poem!
Congrats 🪐
Beautifully done. You have a wonderful way with words :) Congratulations on Top Story!!
Another love story gone wrong. Life happening.
Once again a beautiful read. Congratulations
Fantastic! Congratulations Lonzo 🎉✨🎇🎆❗💖
gorgeous work! Congrats on your Top Story! Very well deserved! I stan this series! 😍
I would totally love a Juliet series!! 💔❤️x
I love this so much!
Great poem