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Troubleshooting Daggers

Wishing to be wrapped in warm devotion, but the wind stands frost Cold...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 18 days ago • 1 min read
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Troubleshooting Daggers
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Wrapped in a cloak

Stitched with emotions...

Wind blows troubleshooting

Sabers, which I still have

Yet learn to Dodge...

My heart aspires to free Love ❤️

The Love that Comes with Life...

I'm Inquiring if the Universe to show me

Fondness...

Life comes with a drift between

Capturing and living Captured...

So would it be well as the most common sense to live Bold?

Enjoy the faithfulness of change.

Happier times cancel transient pain...

Do we stay safe and healthy by going with or getting rid of Struggles that could lead to living lessons?

Or do we hope patiently still wondering if the universe has a plan?

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  • Real Poetic13 days ago

    Oooo I love this one! Sparked so many emotions.

  • Marilyn Glover15 days ago

    Life comes with a drift between Capturing and living Captured... -so true; beautiful poetry! 💗 💗 💗

  • I just say it is what it is and go with the flow, lol. Loved your poem!

  • Babs Iverson17 days ago

    Beautiful, Lonzo!!!1💖💖💕

  • Leslie Writes17 days ago

    Uplifting words. 💖 “Enjoy the faithfulness of change.” I’m working on this right now.

  • My favorite was "the faithfulness of change". My question of "transient pain" is how long must we endure it, hoping to come out the other side, before we begin to accept that it's not so transient?

  • Caroline Craven17 days ago

    Beautiful ❤️

  • Roy Stevens18 days ago

    Going with I think. Or maybe that's just self-consolation. What do you really think? Good stuff as always. Thanks for keeping my brain matter busy sir! 💗💓

  • Dana Crandell18 days ago

    I found this very inspirational. Well writ', Lonzo!

  • Donna Renee18 days ago

    “Happier times cancel transient pain” 😢❤️🥰 beautiful.

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