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All of a sudden

For the Inverse Challenge

By Kay HusnickPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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All of a sudden
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All of a sudden, it's someone new

the person I want to tell the second I have good news,

the person I want to vent to when the anger settles in, when I want to throw my laptop across the room,

the person I want to hear telling me it's going to be okay,

and all of a sudden, I am writing to the ether,

writing my thank you's to the universe, writing to someone who will never read my words in a different way than I was before

it's funny how quickly everything changes, and I find myself

thinking about what comes next

love poems
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Kay Husnick

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  • Brandon Phillips2 months ago

    Great work!

  • Andrew Pretzel2 months ago

    Another great top story. congrats!

  • Akshat Hatwal2 months ago

    Beautiful and relatable

  • Daphsam2 months ago

    Very well written!

  • Lennox Morales2 months ago

    Lovely

  • Gargie S Anand2 months ago

    This is beautiful!

  • Rana Mubashir Ali2 months ago

    https://vocal.media/education/the-effect-of-technology-on-our-health-yk4es0i0b

  • Lightbringer 2 months ago

    Amazing Poem

  • Kodah2 months ago

    💗Congrats on Top Story !!💗

  • Anna 2 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳

  • JBaz2 months ago

    The discovery of New love , and new recognition of one’s self This inverse poem was done so well

  • Manisha Dhalani2 months ago

    Congrats on top story!

  • olymoolla2 months ago

    Good

  • Carol Townend2 months ago

    This is brilliant. The exact words, with the same point of view, are read from top to bottom and bottom to top, and they are well done.

  • Gerard DiLeo2 months ago

    Careful. Throwing your laptop in an inverse poem will see it sailing right back at you, read the other way. Well done.

  • sleepy drafts2 months ago

    Wow - this is so incredibly done. Both readings are meticulously crafted and hold so much weight; the reverse reading feels so hopeful. Beautifully done. 💗 Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    No, don' t throw your laptop. This is wonderful. Congrats on the TS.

  • ROCK 2 months ago

    This was an exemplary example of a well written inverse. I am such a dolt. My first inverse was word by word rather than sentence by sentence. I have thrown a few things in my day, but not my laptop as it holds all my writing.

  • Evocative & thought-provoking either way I read it. It is intriguing when I notice that look in the other person's face as they patiently indulge me in whatever it is I'm sharing that says, "Okay, so...? When may I go back to what I was doing without dismissing or offending you?" The thing about relationships is that they're not reciprocal. They're connected. Frequently we're not on the same wavelength. But there is grace, respect, tolerance, appreciation & love.

  • Test2 months ago

    This is a beautifully written

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