Wetter & Wetter
Isn't a Story Supposed to Have a Climax?
She let me do
what she had never before.
“Disgusting,”
is what she thought
fully germaphobe—
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oral.
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Hesitant at first,
slowly, tenderly,
arousing her pleasure…,
& then I woke.
———Я———
Back to sleep
as fast as you can,
do not let the moment pass!
And I did,
returning to that sweet slumber
where two were becoming one.
———Я———
Awake again,
lightly drifting,
as though to ensure a remembrance
upon morning light.
———Я———
Back to sleep
between her thighs.
Four times…,
maybe five…,
continuing the same dream.
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What a night!
One to treasure
until it returns.
This poem was written for James & I's Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza. The prompt was to write a fantasy fiction or a poem about your most recent dream(s). There is no word count or time limit for this challenge. Hopefully you'll try this out too!
You can read more about our crazy ambition summer challenge below:
https://vocal.media/motivation/james-and-oneg-s-summer-writing-challenge-extravaganza
About the Creator
Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock
Retired Ordained Elder in The United Methodist Church having served for a total of 30 years in Missouri, South Dakota & Kansas.
Born in Watertown, SD on 9/26/1959. Married to Sandra Jellison-Knock on 1/24/1986. One son, Keenan, deceased.
Comments (16)
Well, I say!!!!!. Kind of avoided reading this one, now i am blind. Blushing, even though you cant see it on my dark choco skin. Oh wow. I say, I don't know what to say. Though i have said plenty. Dreams are the best.
Well, gosh. 😮
This was...interesting and a good read...weird but good!
What dreams may come? Nice piece? Okay, I'll stop now! Haha! But read and enjoyed!
Well, being physically disabled, sex doesn't really apply to me. However, I occasionally do gay phone sex for extra money, so. https://vocal.media/filthy/confessions-of-a-male-phone-sex-operator
Not exactly our type of thing to read, i must confess. We like to keep such things to the imagination, or at least not so descriptive. But you pulled it off well and with a touch of humor. Well done as always!!!💙 Anneliese
Fantastic writing!
You've captured the beauty in the vulgar here, Randy. I had many puns on your name prepared for this. However, they seem out of place in such a lovely poem.
Excellent take on the Challenge. You can be a exotica writer for sure
Woooooooooo wait, who wrote this?! Great job and what a shell shocker
very "tongue in cheek" - well done!
Damn❗❗❗❗ Randy, I didn't know you had this in you😉❤️📝💯👌 Excellent Piece❗
Lol, I have the same question as Lamar! 🤣🤣🤣🤣
phew… *fans self…. I think I need to sit down for a minute 🙈✨ Great job!
Loved the play on words with the subtitle. And what have you been watching before you go to sleep, Mister? 😅. Dreams can be so deceptive and cruel sometimes... Except the one that inspired this poem. Great read, Randy!
Well done!!! ❤️❤️💕