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Wetter & Wetter

Isn't a Story Supposed to Have a Climax?

By Randy Wayne Jellison-KnockPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
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Wetter & Wetter
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She let me do

what she had never before.

“Disgusting,”

is what she thought

fully germaphobe—

———Я———

oral.

———Я———

Hesitant at first,

slowly, tenderly,

arousing her pleasure…,

& then I woke.

———Я———

Back to sleep

as fast as you can,

do not let the moment pass!

And I did,

returning to that sweet slumber

where two were becoming one.

———Я———

Awake again,

lightly drifting,

as though to ensure a remembrance

upon morning light.

———Я———

Back to sleep

between her thighs.

Four times…,

maybe five…,

continuing the same dream.

———Я———

What a night!

One to treasure

until it returns.

This poem was written for James & I's Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza. The prompt was to write a fantasy fiction or a poem about your most recent dream(s). There is no word count or time limit for this challenge. Hopefully you'll try this out too!

You can read more about our crazy ambition summer challenge below:

https://vocal.media/motivation/james-and-oneg-s-summer-writing-challenge-extravaganza

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About the Creator

Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock

Retired Ordained Elder in The United Methodist Church having served for a total of 30 years in Missouri, South Dakota & Kansas.

Born in Watertown, SD on 9/26/1959. Married to Sandra Jellison-Knock on 1/24/1986. One son, Keenan, deceased.

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  • Novel Allen6 months ago

    Well, I say!!!!!. Kind of avoided reading this one, now i am blind. Blushing, even though you cant see it on my dark choco skin. Oh wow. I say, I don't know what to say. Though i have said plenty. Dreams are the best.

  • L.C. Schäfer8 months ago

    Well, gosh. 😮

  • Paul Stewart8 months ago

    This was...interesting and a good read...weird but good!

  • C. Rommial Butler8 months ago

    What dreams may come? Nice piece? Okay, I'll stop now! Haha! But read and enjoyed!

  • Tom Baker8 months ago

    Well, being physically disabled, sex doesn't really apply to me. However, I occasionally do gay phone sex for extra money, so. https://vocal.media/filthy/confessions-of-a-male-phone-sex-operator

  • Test8 months ago

    Not exactly our type of thing to read, i must confess. We like to keep such things to the imagination, or at least not so descriptive. But you pulled it off well and with a touch of humor. Well done as always!!!💙 Anneliese

  • Tiffany Gordon 8 months ago

    Fantastic writing!

  • Dean F. Hardy8 months ago

    You've captured the beauty in the vulgar here, Randy. I had many puns on your name prepared for this. However, they seem out of place in such a lovely poem.

  • Mariann Carroll8 months ago

    Excellent take on the Challenge. You can be a exotica writer for sure

  • Woooooooooo wait, who wrote this?! Great job and what a shell shocker

  • Brenton F8 months ago

    very "tongue in cheek" - well done!

  • Damn❗❗❗❗ Randy, I didn't know you had this in you😉❤️📝💯👌 Excellent Piece❗

  • Lol, I have the same question as Lamar! 🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • phew… *fans self…. I think I need to sit down for a minute 🙈✨ Great job!

  • Lamar Wiggins8 months ago

    Loved the play on words with the subtitle. And what have you been watching before you go to sleep, Mister? 😅. Dreams can be so deceptive and cruel sometimes... Except the one that inspired this poem. Great read, Randy!

  • Babs Iverson8 months ago

    Well done!!! ❤️❤️💕

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