To Greenwater
With Someone You Love
This was inspired by two lovely friends. I just wanted to imagine a place of love and healing. I hope this has worked for you.
There is a couplet in Bob Dylan's "Shelter From The Storm" that also helped inspire this:
Try imagining a place where it's always safe and warm
Come in, she said ,I'll give ya shelter from the storm
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Take The Hand Of The One You Love
Walk Together, Never Falter
Through The Forest, Treetops Above
To The Shores Of The Green Water
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This Is The Place To Soothe Your Soul
Maybe Share A Little Laughter
This Place Makes You Feel Healed And Whole
On The Shores Of The Green Water
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To Walk Awhile With One You Love
To Be Happy Ever After
A Golden Autumn Treasure Trove
By The Shores Of The Green Water
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Soothing Songs From An Angel's Choir
Under Trees By The Green Water
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This is For The Vocal Epistolary Challenge which you can read about below. It is about my appreciation of the support of my friends and audience and I have used their comments as part of the body of this poem. You may see one of yours and I hope that is OK
By Mike Singleton - Mikeydredabout a year ago in Poets
Comments (8)
The color green always offers calm and inspiration, doesn't it? Lovely poem, Mike!
Green is such a healing colour π. Beautiful and calming. Thank you π€
This was very calming Mike. βΊοΈ
That was beautiful Mike. I would happily recite this to my love and claim it as my own. No, not really.
I wish I can go to that place. I just wanna go somewhere and go off grid. Things have not been good and I just don't know how to handle it. Beautiful poem!
I don't know, that looks like quite the algae bloom. It doesn't look like a good spot either for swimming or fishing. Then again, at least it's not a blue algae bloom. In spite of the above caveat, love the poem. Though some might read it as romantic, I believe to call it such would be a disservice. It is so much more. It is an expression of life-long love.
wow very nice
Love this!!!ππ