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Shivering Shimmer

A Growing Poem

By Oneg In The ArcticPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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Shivering Shimmer
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Shivers

Icicle droplets

Skyfall towards earth

Nurturing, seedlings reaching out

Waves shimmering across sheet ice

Crashing over rainbow rocks relentlessly scattered

Air gracefully glides around every surface rapidly

Goosebumps popping as snow geese fly over head

Raven coasts the breeze observing everything without fear

Beady eyes, loud cries, the flap of power, boundless

Shiver at the sheer audacity of life creating you, effortless

You are just water falling, shimmering, crashing, relentless, graceful and boundless

~

This was a little poetry prompt I tried out with a friend, where each line has another word added. Sometimes a poem can just keep going forever, but finding a way to tie it all back together is where it gets climactic I suppose.

If you'd like to read any of my other poems, feel free to check out the one below.

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About the Creator

Oneg In The Arctic

A storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.

Water is Life ✊

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  • Mike Singleton - Mikeydred2 months ago

    Using the italics makes it look like icicles , great words

  • Julia Schulz2 months ago

    Lyrical.

  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    Such gorgeous language. I loved the format!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    Amazing!! Last line of “you are just water falling” wow! ❤️❤️

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    This is fantastic. Love the format. Well done.

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    Beautiful!! Really love this 😍

  • Nice!!! Very Canadian!!! Excellent work.

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Magnificent 💕😊💖

  • Keila Aartila2 months ago

    Stunning! ❄️💕

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