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Infinity House

An electric dream

By Oneg In The ArcticPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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Infinity House
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Looped house spirals in electric

Greens and reds and blues

The house an illusion yet, still

Slipping cross wavy floorboards

Slipping spiralling, still

The dreams of secret doors

And crannies and nooks to

Hide in, new rooms

Hide in, old rooms

The dreams of secret doors that lead to

Rooms from my unconscious

Playground bedroom

Blues walls with red planes flying across green fields

My imagination is endless

My dreams in HD full surround sound

Of places crossed between once and never

The staircases always grandeur

Golden hues and dazzling chandeliers

I once dreamed I saw everyone I knew and everyone I’ve yet to meet

Doors and staircases towards different opportunities

Looping through in electric

Green, red, and blue

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Oneg In The Arctic

A storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.

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  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    Loved it!!! 💕💖😊

  • Veronica Coldironabout a month ago

    I can honestly say that this poem captures the feeling of being in a dream with interesting pictures and unexpected twists and turns. Very well done! Your rhythm/non-rhythm was also very well crafted for something that seems "free form". 😉

  • Linda Rivenbarkabout a month ago

    Very imaginative. I love the use of vivid bright colors in this poem. These two lines caught my attention: My dreams in HD full surround sound Of places crossed between once and never

  • Rick Henry Christopherabout a month ago

    Really interesting and colorful. Gréat job!!!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oooo, this was trippy and I loved it!

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  • Caroline Janeabout a month ago

    I once dreamed I saw everyone I knew and everyone I’ve yet to meet - Loving this line... and also... did you really? Mind-blowing.

  • Kali Mailhotabout a month ago

    Very dream like, very surreal. Reminds me very much of a poem about a dream state that now I’m thinking I’d like to share. I really enjoy your use of words, like certain grandeur. And their repetitive imagery of primary colours. Sometimes it feels like dreams are moving between pixels under a microscope. In some way, that feeling exists, and I feel you’ve captured that feeling well.

  • Stephanie J. Bradberryabout a month ago

    Your poem definitely catches the surreal vibe. I love the use of repetition, alliteration and anaphora.

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    This is really cool, trippy actually. Well done

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