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cigarette smoke dance
minor keys by heavy hands
ride that soul rhythm
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Comments (7)
I felt so cool reading it, lol. This was truly excellent :)
Gosh this was brilliant!
Excellent!
A wonderful musical haiku
Good one. You've captured the essence of the blues.
Brilliant!!!
Excellent. I could feel that.