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A Senryu Critique and Challenge Below

By Matthew J. FrommPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

A wonderful film,

but with one issue, corely.

Ken got off easy

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I'm traveling for work this week and am putting forth a quick challenge to fill my new content coffers. Give me your best senryu critiques for any book/movie/show you've watched recently. Post them in the comments below so I don't miss them, and tag this post in yours. On Friday, I'll send a small tip to my favorite one. Happy critiquing!

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Matthew J. Fromm

Full-time nerd, history enthusiast, and proprietor of arcane knowledge.

Here there be dragons, knights, castles, and quests (plus the occasional dose of absurdity).

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    Written by Matthew J. Fromm