Wonka: A Senryu Review
For Matthew Fromm's Senryu Critique
Sumptuous frilled treat.
Suspension of disbelief
Stretched, but willingly.
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For Matthew's Senryu Critique challenge, below, because there is always time for a quick senryu, right?
Though less time, of course, for accompanying lower word limit waffle. I could moan about having too much to do, which is of course on my mind, or I could offer a nod to the oncoming spring. Or I could just go for a second Senryu, two in one. OK, lets do that. This one is called Faraway Downs, which I watched in a day when I was poorly and lain out in my bed before Christmas. Its not that I didnt enjoy Australia to an extent, and the photography is delightful, but I'd have been peeved to dedicate four or five hours to it if I hadnt been feeling too rubbish to enjoy much.
Lockdown re-jigs dont
Throw good money after bad,
But time is precious
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