Anxious & The Wiseman
Many words are not necessary to make an impact.
To no surprise, I'm here again; hovering over top of the rabbit hole.
Well, how you decide to look at your situation can change it.
What other way is there to see it? My future is ruined. I feel it in my soul.
Everything will work out, and you'll forget about it. Don't quit.
I'll try not to Popop, but to be honest, I'm losing control...
Then, stop trying, and start doing to pull yourself together.
Hmm, that’s pretty clever.
I know. Now, get busy.
I can do whatever?
If you stay in the city, and abstain from doing anything silly.
Yes, sir. I’ll try my best.
What did I say earlier about trying?
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Comments (6)
Boy, did that hit a "Yoda nerve!" Life on this planet ain't exactly easy right now. Re-focus and redoubled efforts. Individual and collective deep breaths. "Do, or do not. There is no try." Thanks for this one RP!
"Hovering over top of the rabbit hole" is a very apt description. Great poem!
Stop trying and start doing. I think I can try that 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Loved your poem!
Excellent work.
Highly appreciate your work.
Wonderfully inspiring. Well done.