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A Few More

Closing the Critique Challenge

By Atomic HistorianPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
A Few More
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A fist full of words

Just a few critiques more

That’s what was in store

When the word slinger

Pulled the computer from the drawer

The time to close drew near

Is there time for one more?

Only time will tell

Is it good?

Or does it smell?

You decide

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    Written by Atomic Historian