A Few More
Closing the Critique Challenge
A fist full of words
Just a few critiques more
That’s what was in store
When the word slinger
Pulled the computer from the drawer
The time to close drew near
Is there time for one more?
Only time will tell
Is it good?
Or does it smell?
You decide
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Smells sweet if it smells at all. Great critique.
This gets me excited! The critique challenge has been one of the best so far, I think! Here a couple of more obscure entries! I hope you like them 😀 https://vocal.media/critique/a-critique-of-the-ex https://vocal.media/critique/my-critique-of-the-critique-challenge-itself
Well done!!!!
This was a fantastic finish! I loved it!
And time for one more comment. I like this, that sense of urgency, knowing that something is right there on the tip of your mind, yearning to come out, but there's also a time crunch.