Character Development
Barbie Dreamscapes is a Disappointment
A Barbie novel is a wonderful project for someone to uptake, this one however is a huge flop. It is painful to see the doll company I have loved hire someone to write a complete disgrace to Barbie. The book even starts about the author bragging about being the first to write a Barbie book. There are hundreds of Barbie books and writings, plus anyone with the pleasure of being handed the project by the actual company would be humble. The woman who wrote the Dreamscapes book is most definitely not that way.
By Seashell Harpspring 7 days ago in Critique
As told by the Furry Were Rabbit.
How's it going, readers? Allow me to introduce myself: my name is Noiba. I'm a were rabbit, basically a shape-shifting one, and I’m trying to help my author, Stephanie Borges, promote my book. I guess she wasn't joking when she said writing the book is the easy part; promoting it is the hard part. I don't blame her for getting sad when she sees there are no book sales for my story.
By stephanie borgesabout a month ago in Critique
The Most Overrated. Runner-Up in The Most Overrated Challenge.
I've been dreading this topic for one big reason: I've always believed that liking or disliking a book comes down to personal taste. I enjoy plenty of things that would make most people shake their heads. I really don't want to yuck anyone's yum — which is exactly why it pains me to say this: ACOTAR did not live up to the hype my sisters swore by.
By Chel Writes2 months ago in Critique
Pretty Good, Pretty Bad, Pretty Woman
Vivian is standing in that poured-on long red dress, with upswept hair, twinkly eyes and enormous Julia Roberts smile. Edward approaches, spiffy in a tux with a black bow tie, twinkly eyes and smug Richard Gere smile. He extends his arms and opens a jewelry box. With her white glove-enswathed arms, she moves to reach the sparkling diamonds and rubies inside. He snaps the box shut; she laughs. You can hear it. Roy Orbison croons “Pretty woman, walking down the street....” Even if you’ve not seen it, you know about the movie “Pretty Woman.” Millions saw it in theaters, millions more have seen it in the past decades, it remains a fun and popular favorite.
By B.B. Potter2 months ago in Critique
