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My Self-Critique of My Writing Battle Entry
Now that this season’s Writing Battle is over, I felt it was appropriate to do a bit of self-reflection and critiquing on my entry. Key finding: it was fine…but...
Matthew FrommPublished about 16 hours ago in CritiquePractical Nursing
Practice, practice, practice those skills requiring patience and accuracy action potentials, community help teaching and learning for the
Mark GrahamPublished a day ago in CritiqueFatherhood
Again, what does fatherhood mean? Fathers making allowances that affect our health and well-being as well as our emotional
Mark GrahamPublished 2 days ago in CritiqueFatherhood
What is fatherhood? Being a father means- Furthering one's knowledge that allows for the health and wellness that elicits and elaborates ideas and
Mark GrahamPublished 2 days ago in CritiqueHappy Father's Day!
To all the fathers out there. Happy Father's Day for this is a day for you to enjoy with anyone and everyone. This is a day for you to relax and have fun with whomever you may want. You will receive some presents that you may and may not need, but you know that they came with love whether it is a card, a tie, or some cologne that you may only wear on some very, very special occasion. For this day is a chance to make connections and memories.
Mark GrahamPublished 2 days ago in CritiqueFlag Day
What is Flag Day? Flag Day is the day where citizens can display their American flag and show how proud they are of their country and the freedom to do this. It is a day of respect for all flags in a sense. The stripes on the flag stand for if I remember correctly: red for the blood that was drawn in defending the flag, white for the souls who gave their lives for the flag and the blue is for the battlefields that were fought on over the years. The stars are for all the states. Flag Day is a day to be remembered not for having picnics but just to remember what the flag means.
Mark GrahamPublished 4 days ago in CritiqueJuneteenth
What is Juneteenth? This is a holiday describing the end of slavery in a way for some. There was a time that some plantation owners gave certain freedoms to their slaves. Some saw ways to improve their standard of living and learned what it took to become free and learn to read and write for there were black schools even though they were well hidden, but for some learning gave them a chance to be FREE in a way. To be honest I am not sure about this for I was trying to remember from a program I remember watching a while ago. Juneteenth is kind of controversial depending on circumstances and what you may believe. We all need to feel free and to show understanding of all. The Lord Jesus made us all in his image whether black, white, red or yellow.
Mark GrahamPublished 4 days ago in CritiqueHoly Bible
What can one say about the Holy Bible? The Holy Bible no matter what faith or edition that you read from really does say the same things. The Lord is the one true leader that we all need to follow. This is a book of books from the beginning to the end that show many Revelations to one's living their own lives. It is also a book about many families and their issues; governmental leaders and what they do that is not right but seems to work out in many ways good and bad; how to make friends and keep them and work along with your enemies, and many more stories that one can have help in understanding how to live their lives. The Holy Bible is one great 'Good Book'.
Mark GrahamPublished 5 days ago in CritiqueBEST BLENDERS OF 2024
In the realm of modern kitchen appliances, blenders have become indispensable tools that cater to a wide range of culinary needs. From preparing nutritious smoothies and refreshing beverages to creating creamy soups and sauces, blenders offer unparalleled versatility and convenience. These appliances have evolved significantly over the years, integrating advanced technologies and innovative features to simplify food preparation and elevate culinary experiences.
Arash NiriPublished 5 days ago in CritiqueMowing
How old is too6 old to expect the younger generation to start taking over lawn mowing chores. I like cutting grass, but at 60 years of age and cutting grass since I was 12 years of age it does seem to get old at times. Lawn care does make your yard look good when keeping the weeds down and planting flowers, especially roses and a few others. But, in very hot and humid conditions it is not a chore that I relish doing every week.
Mark GrahamPublished 6 days ago in CritiqueOwls
As you notice what I assume are owls are colored with peach on all four corners of the page. Other colors I showed to offset the owls were purple, greens and in the center for the small border brown. I used forest green for the center point of the owl corners as well as in the center of the page to go against the brown. I believe it shows a good contrast. Please comment.
Mark GrahamPublished 8 days ago in CritiqueFish Story
Here is a picture of swirls and bubbles and other shapes that could be found underwater for I used silver and shades of blue and few areas of pink that could be the light of the sun under the water. The fish are silver swimming in all directions. To me this image before I really noticed the fish kind of reminded me of 'Starry Night' by a very famous artist. Please comment and share your thoughts.
Mark GrahamPublished 8 days ago in Critique