
the trees along the highway
are sun-soaked
and golden;
red flames lick
against furrowed clouds.
we dive
into the
skyline and
hold our breath as
we pry each other for
openings,
bids,
moments of connection.
Somehow
we get it wrong.
There seems to be a universe
wedged between our front seats,
some plane we keep slipping off,
then scrambling back on to.
A place where
the nights turn into mornings
turn into days:
the ones racing
under us along
cracked asphalt;
those days,
sun-soaked
and golden,
all red-flamed foliage
and slowly sweetening skies.
The sun,
a sailor’s warning.
About the Creator
sleepy drafts
a sleepy 26-year-old named em :)
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Comments (7)
I really loved the concept of trying to make a connection yet realizing there is a universe between you, all while enwrapped in the beauty of nature. Lovely, highly emotional poem; well done!
I do like the form almost like s stiletto taking us with you on your journey
Oh wow this was beautiful ❤️ nature blended with modern perspective I love it!! :)
Beautiful!!! Love the Fall colors!!!
There were just so much emotions in your poem! Loved it!
This is incredible. Very well done.
Beautiful work!