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Peaking Through the Pinholes

By Rick HenryPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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Sunshine bring me a bouquet of beauty

Sunshine bring me a face that is cheerful

Sunshine grace me with love eternity

Sunshine love me even when I'm tearful

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Peaceful shower me with your enchantment

Peaceful guide me through these forlorn moments

Peaceful keep me from feeling resentment

Peaceful hold me throughout the self-torments

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Mother I love you more than words can say

Mother your advice steers me through the night

Mother I need you each and every day

Mother your soft words are my guiding light

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Sunshine remember me when there is no light

Sunshine please hold me through the darkened night

inspirational
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About the Creator

Rick Henry

Writing is a distraction for me. It takes me to places unknown that fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and a soothing of the breaks and bruises of the day.

https://www.facebook.com/groups/vocalplusassist

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  • Stephanie J. Bradberry7 days ago

    So pretty and endearing!

  • Arctic19 days ago

    Beautiful!

  • Babs Iverson21 days ago

    Lovely & loved!!!

  • Daniella Cressman3 months ago

    Absolutely beautiful, Rick!

  • Heather Hubler5 months ago

    Very moving, loved it :)

  • The Dani Writer5 months ago

    Breathgiving!

  • It is a true gift when the words flow from with in!!

  • This was emotional and touching. Loved it so much!

  • Linda Rivenbark5 months ago

    Very moving poem with great imagery!

  • Wonderful words beautifully presented.

  • Irene Economou5 months ago

    Rick, I love your thoughts so eloquently put into words in this thoughtful poem.

  • Dawn Salois5 months ago

    Wonderful, beautifully written poem. Both inspirational and heartwarming. Excellent work!

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    That is so sweet 🥰

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    Very nice. Well done.

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