Beauty Awakens
In the Petals of a Rose
A delicate rose blooms in my garden
Reflecting a notion so courageous
Velvety petals beauty awakens
American Beauty gently calms us
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The sun and the wind caress its petals
Romantically flowing through the cool night
Comfort and beauty in my heart settles
Its vibrant color is a lovely sight
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Intense fragrance rich dark deep pink beauty
Captures my senses with thrill and delight
The wonders of earth fall deep into me
Bringing a glamour an elegant sight
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The rose stands strong among all the others
Fills me with love like that from my mother
About the Creator
Rick Henry Christopher
Writing is a distraction to fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.
The shattered pieces of life will not discourage me.
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Comments (17)
As an herbalist, I'm a sucker for roses.
This is just so lovely, and a beautiful way to describe your mother.
Beautiful thank you.. subscribed!
Such a beautifully written sonnet. Loved the imageties!
Beautifully written.
Nice poem!
Beautiful sonnet! 🥰
I agree with everyone else! So beautiful!
The so beautiful ♥️🌹
All the roses of the world...thank you. Beautiful poem!
Beautiful…I could smell the rose.
Lovely poem. Good take on the challenge
Excellent work Rick a great take on the challenge
Beautiful poem! Excellent descriptions.
That was very nice. Well done.
Beautiful poetry, and those last two lines spoke to my momma's heart :) This was a very enjoyable read, well done.
Awesome & beautiful!!! Bravo!