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Purpureus Realm

Embraced by Purpurite Reveries

By Dharrsheena Raja SegarranPublished about a year ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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Photo by Daniel Dvorský on Unsplash

Every night at midnight

The purple clouds came out

To dance with the blushing sky

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Beneath the periwinkle clouds

Dolphins flew majestically

Synchronised aerobatics

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Marionettes being pulled

Though the lavender haze

Starfishes twirled skyward

~~~~~

Seahorses gravitised by the moon

Formed a vertical magenta chain

Hooking tails to snouts

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Nymphs swirled up the chain

Raced to touch the moon

Left a glittery trail of lilac glow

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The moon turned burgundy

Smiled and sparkled jubilantly

Sashayed emitting lightnings

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Amethyst ripples on the surface

The sky dropped its diamonds

Waves celebrated the reunion
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Dharrsheena Raja Segarran

My mental health decline brought about a lot of darkness and I embraced it. It now flows out mostly as Dark Stories and Poetry.

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  • Bonnie Bowermanabout a month ago

    This was brillant. I loved it! The imagery was so rich so gorgeous! Thank you!

  • Bonnie Bowerman2 months ago

    You written so many amazing stories! This one was beautiful!

  • Erik ubbink3 months ago

    So introspective

  • Joe O’Connor3 months ago

    I like the vivid imagery, and the gentle, fantastical tone of nature here. Really nice!

  • Patrick M. Ohana7 months ago

    A wonderful and whimsical piece, my friend : )

  • Test7 months ago

    It is enjoyable to read and your imagery is excellent.

  • Donna Fox (HKB)8 months ago

    Your imagery is still just as tantalizing as the first time I read this, I am constantly in awe of your talent!! You honestly should do a book of short stories or poetry or one of each! 💖

  • Donna Fox (HKB)8 months ago

    Your vivid imagery showcased by your incomparable descriptive language of this poem just shines through to breath-takingly! I love the whimsical feel of it and yet it has such a realistic feel as the images you painted dance in the forefront of my mind! Still as beautiful as I remember it being the first time!

  • Jazzy 8 months ago

    The color imagery was so stunning

  • Laura Lann9 months ago

    Your imagery is so beautiful and pulls the reader from one scene and verse to the next. Loved it!

  • Jay Kantor10 months ago

    Dear Dhar - You had me at "Purpureus" - put that into your translator and see what it comes up with? - *Miss you, are you taking a finger-stretching break from all of your type-tapping - Whew, who could blame you? J-Bud

  • Colleen Millsteed 10 months ago

    Now how did I miss this piece. Beautifully written as always and I love a purple sky 💕💕

  • D. ALEXANDRA PORTER10 months ago

    I loved every line of this, including, "Marionettes being pulled/Though the lavender haze/Starfishes twirled skyward" I am in awe. Thank you! 💜

  • Rob Angeli10 months ago

    Dreamy, twilight sky and processional of sealife, thanks.

  • L.C. Schäfer11 months ago

    Gorgeous imagery! I feel totally bathed in colour and magic 😁

  • Heather N King11 months ago

    What a beautiful poem! I love the format and cadence! Keep on writing!

  • Sarah Danaher11 months ago

    enjoyable to read and your imagery is excellent.

  • Donna Fox (HKB)12 months ago

    This was really beautiful Dharrsheena! I love your use of descriptive language that creates vivid imagery and how it tells such a magical story! I also love your use of personification to create an elegant form of movement for each creature, that feels so realistic but yet so imaginative! This was simply breath taking, I am in awe of your skill with words! 💜

  • Very magical, luv the words

  • Stephen Kramer Avitabileabout a year ago

    Loved that! And really enjoyed the visuals and the use of color in this. So visual!

  • Roy Stevensabout a year ago

    Nice flow. It works well with your chosen format.

  • Adam Stanbridgeabout a year ago

    Excellent poem. I look forward to reading more. Heart, comment, subbed. looking forward to more.

  • very nice!

  • VJHDabout a year ago

    Such a lovely world created in this poem with such vivid imagery. ♥️

  • Cendrine Marrouatabout a year ago

    That was a very interesting poem. I like the almost childish tone of it.

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