She Was Just A Child
But no one protected her
If she could travel back in time
She would go to when she was 4 years old
She would have protected her younger self
From the pedophile disguised as her uncle
She would have exposed him
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If she could travel back in time
She would go to when she was 10 years old
She would have protected her younger self
From finding out about the adulteries commited
It was inappropriate information at that age
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But she cannot travel back in time
She has to live with all the trauma
Because there was not one proper adult
To protect her younger self
Like she would have
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I am so sorry. I donβt know if this is a story based on reality, but if it is, I am so sorry. No one should have to go through that. Either way, you are such a strong person, and an amazing writer!πβ¨
I'm sure you said somewhere you don't write poems. What the heck? You bloody do. Sad and moving.
Yes! Heartbreaking and sad! I had EMDR to help me with a pedophile experience. Thankfully my brother and I both told and we never saw him again, that I know of. A cousin to my dad. I had uncles with a sugar shack always introducing women as our aunties. My mother shut that shack down. It was her brothers. She had it torn down. π That trauma and more. It adds up and it is easy to self medicate with drugs and alcohol.Thankfully, there is help!
Adults should have protected you. That was their job. You were an innocent child. The fact that no one protected you from a pedophile leaves you feeling alone and frightened, like you can't trust anyone, and those wounds stay open for a very long time. I'm sorry, my friend.
Hugs. I know hugs aren't sufficient; my heart aches and goes out to you. Powerful poem, very cathartic.
Too often too true. Simply and powerfully written.πAnneliese
heartbreakingly beautiful
The picture on this post immediately grabbed my attention. Then to read the story poem itself.. This actually - and unfortunately - resonates powerfully with me as my beloved wife of 38 years went through the exact type of horrible abuse for 10 YEARS of her childhood at the hands of those whom she should have been able to trust. We now have a court case against several counties in New York based on it. Thankfully those pedophiles that did this to her are all decease... but the state system failed both her and her twin sister totally all those years back.
This is so sad and beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Dharrsheena, this was heartbreaking and yet so beautiful! You did a wonderful job sending the message that actions have a ripple effect and sometimes others suffer for your actions. I have so much empathy for this that this is a reality for, this was a breath taking tribute to those who know this pain. π
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Well done!!! Sending hugs!!!πππ
Wow, very touching, very sad, so well written.
Blunt and effective. Childhood trauma is pretty much universal to one degree or another, but no question some are worse than others. Despite prison reforms it's hard not to wish that all pedophiles be entered into the general population so the parents 'in there' can deal with him or her.
As a mother, that was a gut punch to read. We've been through our own trauma and a part of me has died these last few years watching as the unspeakable violence we experienced in one night has manifested so differently in all of my kids. I'm so sorry for the terror and torture you endured as a child who needed protection and did not get it. My heart goes out to you! I can only imagine how difficult that is not only to deal with personally, but to also share publicly. Thank you for sharing and raising awareness.
very courageous to share.
Going back in time would be so good because I would change lots of things. A sad poem and beautifully sentimental for a lot of people.
Sorry you had to go through that and that life is rough as guts at times. Hope you are healing and commend you for your courage! :)
Oh my goodness, sending you so much healing love β€οΈ this was powerful and must have been hard to write. π
I have just picked this up, you have my support
I often wonder at those who say that if they could go back, they wouldn't change a thing. They are either exceptionally fortunate or delusional! Blessings to you, dear, and may time grant you magnificent experiences as it unfolds before you, regardless of what you've left behind! So mote it be! π
As always great job! this one was very powerful. its painfully sad how some kids go through this.
Very powerful this one hit home as a survivor myself
Great job. It is amazing what we endure at the hands of another, still taking the blame for it