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Petrichor

A compound haiku about California and the return of her Rain Goddess. A bittersweet love story. 👸🏻🌧

By Gina C.Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 2 min read
Top Story - January 2023
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With fertile soil, she's

agriculturally divine;

almonds, oranges, wine.

--

Tragedy transpires

from drought-bred forest fires;

claiming homes and lives.

--

Air becomes desired -

smokey winds aroar in choirs;

then Petrichor; the

---

Rain Goddess returns.

Atmospheric rivers pour;

bittersweet for Earth.

--

Gina C. 🧚‍♀️✨

Please allow for the variations in syllable counts between "fire", "transpire", "desired", "choir", and "oranges" to be as diverse as the four elements. Everything fits the 5-7-5 rule based on my own, California pronunciation. ☺️

Author's Note: I wrote this Quadru-haiku as a tribute to my beautiful home state, California. Many may not know that California is full of more than just stereotypical, sunshiny, happy-go-lucky coastal beaches. The golden state is also comprised of a diverse topography that ranges from snow-capped mountains, to dry, arid deserts - to flat, fertile valleys.

California abundantly grows more than 400 combined fruits, nuts, and vegetables, and has been the nation's highest producer of agriculture for more than 100 years. In addition - according to the Cal Poly College of Agriculture, Food and Environmental Sciences - "California is the only state in the U.S. to export the following commodities: almonds, artichokes, dates, dried plums, figs, garlic, kiwifruit, olives, pistachios, raisins, and walnuts." (California Polytechnic State University, 2023).

Despite its astounding agricultural fertility, California has - due to climate change - unfortunately been suffering a drought for the better part of 20 years. The lack of rain in the winter has continuously caused what is now infamously known as "California Fire Season", which emerges in July and lasts until late October. During Fire Season, the Earth and grass - completely stripped of moisture after the hot summer months - are especially prone to flame.

However, the beginning of 2023 has met California with a phenomenal (albeit frightening) atmospheric river. This enormous, air-born body of water is currently swirling above the state in the form of multiple cyclone bombs; throwing downpours upon our dry, thirsty soil.

The return of the rain is bittersweet. While it will hopefully end our multiple decade-long drought, the influx of water is too much for our infiltration systems to handle at once and is therefore causing floods, damage to thousands of homes, and, in the worst cases - loss of life.

Water should never be underestimated.

Petrichor (/ˈpetrīˌkôr/) is defined by the Oxford English Dictionary as "a pleasant smell that frequently accompanies the first rain after a long period of warm, dry weather."

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About the Creator

Gina C.

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Free Verse

Free-Form poet of ethereal style🧚‍♀️✨

Fantasy writer

A sucker for a good rhyme☺️

Fueled by a conflicted soul of fire & water

TT: poetry.in_pajamas

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  • Melanie Tongmarabout a year ago

    A wonderful and touching homage. We experienced a very similar turn of events here in Australia – devastating fires followed by a deluge that swept everything away. We have yet to recover. Thank you for sharing this!

  • Carminumabout a year ago

    A wonderful inclusion of rhymes, and I especially like the linkages between 'aroar', 'choir', and 'Petrichor' (I added this last to my self-compiled dictionary of obscure words, thank you).

  • My Name Is Not Cypressabout a year ago

    So clever!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    I really enjoyed this Gina! You continue to impress! Did you ever get to 100 subscribers? congrats either way, your followers will continue to grow.

  • Baris Ovaliabout a year ago

    Very good and thought provoking. Way to go!!

  • VJHDabout a year ago

    Wonderful writing. Petrichor has always been my favourite word, I just wrote a haiku about this word too, I didn’t realise how popular and well known it is ♥️

  • Isaac Haldeman about a year ago

    This made my morning. Thank you! Keep going!

  • Faith Lovellabout a year ago

    Wow this poem is so beautiful and thank you for the detailed explanation! A love letter to California. A beautiful place that I’d love to visit again. Excited to read more of your work!❤️

  • sleepy draftsabout a year ago

    Wow!! This is so, so stunning! Beautiful poetry, and I loved your note at the end, especially. This is such a gorgeous take on the challenge. <3

  • Okay 👍❤️💯🎯Great work and very insightful❗❗❗

  • Rajshree Thakurabout a year ago

    nice post

  • Sukunaabout a year ago

    Nice read the whole time

  • Testabout a year ago

    Wow! I really hope you get a win...this is stunning work, Gina!

  • Brenton Fabout a year ago

    one of my favourite words and some nice Haiku to go with it! Well Done!

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Love California and all that it offers. Heartbreaking to watch what is happening because of climate change. Beautifully written and love the imagery. ❤️

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Absolutely beautiful. Great top story.

  • Brin J.about a year ago

    A beautiful perspective of California's current and past sufferings.

  • Veronica Coldironabout a year ago

    This was absolutely lovely!

  • SD Siloneabout a year ago

    Love you California 😊💖🙏

  • Stephanie J. Bradberryabout a year ago

    I love the use of couplets. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Sharon Betheaabout a year ago

    😍Wow! Outstanding! Congrats! Each element tells the story.

  • Kalsoom Khanabout a year ago

    Very good post

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  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Congrats on your well deserved top story.

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