"PERILOUS CLIMB"
"STRUGGLING TO GET BACK TO THE TOP"
PERIOLOUS CLIMB
STRUGGLING TO GET BACK TO THE TOP
Expressions of struggling and climbing to the top again a perilous journey of being human.
I had a dream last night.
I dreamed I was atop a tall building built alongside a cliff
As if
To tell me some truth regarding struggles of humanity.
I was so happy in the dream,
It did seem.
I oversaw a booth at a music concert.
The concert had many people that came from near and far
In their car
Or bus
Or train or plane
Anyway, they were going insane.
There were numerous musicians that were there
From out of everywhere.
They trusted me with their cell phones and wallets.
But to my surprise I was so ecstatic about their laughter
And down to earth love with me
To be
There with care
And watch them everywhere.
As I sat in the booth laughing and happy as could be
I forgot how I got there
Without a care
I had climbed up the stairs in the cliff
Of the mountain from the bottom up
To fill my coffee cup
Some of the stairs were rocks along the pathway
That protruded directly from the mountain cliff
In an odd, twisted way
Then the twist was I had to figure out the correct stairs to take
Along the way
The first time was like baking a cake.
Except all my cakes fell in the middle with sides
Soaking with dark chocolate icing
To run my finger through the icing on the sides
Slurping the chocolate off my forefinger
I knew not to linger,
Because if I did the cake would soon be gone
Inside my belly to be regurgitated along
The pathway
So, I pushed myself forward to keep the excitement strong
to not do anything wrong
So, friends would help me climb the cliff
And stairs
As I moved right along
Singing my song.
I turned the corner to see a wading pool
Waiting for me and the others to cross
Across
The large area of 20 feet
To drop off onto a steep
Staircase in front of the elevator
The guests took the elevator,
But the employees and workers had to climb
Perilous cliffs, stairs, and ponds
So, on I wondered atop the building built
Inside the cliff
As if
It would,
Welcome Vicki Lawana, have a good day.
So, the dream continued
After I woke up at 4am to a dark room
Filled with candlelight so bright,
I had to leave my booth position abruptly
When I fell back to sleep
I felt like I needed to keep
My friends cell phones and wallets with me
But treading down the cliff
Required the use of both hands.
So, no plans
To keep them safe
In that place
I seemed to float down the tall building out to the street,
Not knowing who I would meet.
I saw a guy with long dark hair,
Olive skin,
Brown eyes,
Walked up to him & he told me he was not to greet.
So, I looked around some more,
Saw a guy with light brown hair,
Hazel eyes,
Walking up to me
To greet
Me with a hug
So, I said welcome to Mount Potteet Bay
I do say
You look very handsome today.
So, we started to climb back to the top of the tall
Building so high in the clouds
Protruding off the side of a cliff
As if to say welcome to the Potteet Bay
But I lost connection with my new friend
As we turned the corner to go around the bend
The steps were narrow and
Full of danger as I climbed up and around as if I might fall onto the sand.
At the bottom of the tall building in the cliff
I lost my way
Several times that day
Frantically looking for the correct way
To the top
But I had to stop.
The pond was now a small lake.
I had to take
Deep breath to say
Oh, my we must swim across through the high water
To not drown as it’s very deep.
So, as not to loiter
I swam across the small lake that
Ended at another steep cliff of stairs.
I put one foot out, then another
As I saw more cliffs everywhere
I grabbed the protruding,
Pulled myself out of the water stepping onto
The narrow stairs built inside the cliff.
I was weeping and fear
Was as if to say no forward move baby blue.
I tried to climb the cliff,
But kept getting lost
To
The perilous climb
So, sublime
This time
And I woke up
To being one more step closer to the top
Of the tall building built inside a cliff
In Potteet Bay
Along the way
I had realized I lost the white coffee mug
My friend Margo had prepared for me
Along the way
But I knew I must get my coffee now
In my reality without climbing
Again
I am living on the bottom floor.
But know I am okay,
To not worry anymore
As I drank my coffee
I talked to my bird
With a word
Let’s write about the dream today love.
Songs playing as if
To say we can do this today
With blessings from above
All around
Rock on my sisters and brothers
Be strong.
Carry on.
Rock on.
Written by
VICKI LAWANA TRUSSELLI
An ole’ soul & psychic dreamer
Of movies & beyond
To different realities
& realms of humanity
ROCK ON!
About the Creator
Vicki Lawana Trusselli
I worked for the music and film industry in Los Angeles, California and Austin, Texas. I studied nursing, journalism, art, film, and computers in college. I am an empath, Virgo; Leo moon rising, born on the cusp of Libra. Peace Out!
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Comments (20)
Congrats on Top Story!
That "poem" is an adventure! Kudos Top Story-an!
Wow amazing work here!
This is a stunning piece - love how it reads and feels like a dream...the shifting from one part to another part...changing locations...breathtaking really. Well done on Top Story, Vicki!
The story is dope I like it
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Beautifully written! Congrats on top story! Well deserved! I love the mix of the rhyming without a sure scheme and the broken sentences. It gives this jagged sense that closely aligns with the cliff imagery! Very well done!
Congrats on TS. You have crafted a very unique piece and added music and a movie!
Wow you captured a dream like state and put it into words. I felt the mixed emotion and felt the absurdity of the situation. The comparison to cake was brilliant Congratulation
Congrats on Top Story
Intriguing piece. Loved the music too. Congratulations on Top Story!
This is beautiful and a joy to read. I love your descriptive use of language.
WOW Nice
I see the gypsy xoming out of your soul. I too am an old soul and gypsy minded. Like souls...hello.
Creative version of your dream....fantastical
A place I want to visit! Love you!
That's a wild dream. Well done.
Reminds me of a dream two nights ago!!! Wonderfully written!!!💕❤️❤️
Lots of dream logic flowing here.
Great words and love the image/video. I haven't used AI music yet but I may do.