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My Crush☺️

You stand Flattering My Heart with your Beautiful presence...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
My Crush☺️
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Dear, Crush

I only came over just to hear your voice...

And to see your face,

I got a crush on you

That I Can't Escape...

By Jorien Loman on Unsplash

Gazing into your sights

With my teenage Eyes,

I Burst with trepidation but Hide it with My Pride!

By Fauzan Saari on Unsplash

Running home before sundown,

To write in my secret Log, of a Boy, I could never have...
But only Adore in my DayDreams!

I got a Crush on you

And It's Killing me Softly...

By Leonardo Sanches on Unsplash

I get nervous when you speak to me...

My Heart won't stop trembling...

In my mind, I'm like...

“Is he really talking to me?”

“OMG, I Can't Breathe.”

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  • Amelia Moore22 days ago

    ha! this is super cute. it reads like a song.

  • Licia29 days ago

    Beautifully Written..

  • MT Poetryabout a month ago

    great one

  • Randa Rayabout a month ago

    So sweet and nostalgic :)

  • Marilyn Gloverabout a month ago

    "killing me softly"- so beautiful! 🥰🥰🥰

  • K.B. Silver 2 months ago

    This made me smile

  • Inkweaver2 months ago


  • Sofia Joy2 months ago

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  • M Burhan Khan2 months ago

    In the stillness of the night, I lie awake, consumed by plight. Memories of you flood my mind, Of a love that was once so kind. But now you're gone and I'm alone, Longing for a love I've never known. My heart is insatiable, can't get enough, Of the love we had, the tender touch. The pain of missing you is too great, A wound that refuses to abate. I search for solace in memories past, But the pain lingers, it's here to last. Oh, how I ache to hold you near, To feel your heartbeat, to wipe your tear. But now you're gone, and I'm left to cry, Wondering why, oh why, did our love have to die? I try to move on, to forget, But my heart won't let go, it's still beset. By a love that was once so strong, But now it's gone, it's just a sad love song.

  • Cathy Deslippe2 months ago

    Written from the heart, and it is very inspirational.

  • T.F. Hall2 months ago

    Great poem!

  • Hamza Shafiq2 months ago

    great content

  • Linda Rivenbark2 months ago

    Such a sweet picture of an intense time in every life...young love.

  • Abby Kay Mendonca2 months ago

    Awesome! 👏

  • Muhammad Ali2 months ago

    Heart pounding, cheeks blushing red, Love's first crush, fills me with dread. Each line captures the thrill and fear, Of teenage love, oh so dear. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    Ahh, the secrets we swallow when nothing comes of it. Crushes can truly crush. Congrats!

  • I love the way you express yourself, Lonzo. In this you communicate so well the breathlessness we all experience with our crush & so allow us to identify with & participate in what you experience. Congrats on top story!

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 months ago

    Cute stuff! Congrats on your latest Top Story!

  • Jasmine Aguilar2 months ago

    This piece made me smile and I found it very relatable

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    Wow! The feeling of one's crush are so perfectly captured here. 😍 Wonderfully done and congrats on Top Story!! 😍😍

  • Loryne Andawey2 months ago

    What an endearing snapshot of first romances. Well done and congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Novel Allen2 months ago

    Wonderful words of love, Congrats.

  • Brenton F2 months ago

    Crushed Hard! 😊

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