You stand Flattering My Heart with your Beautiful presence...
I only came over just to hear your voice...
And to see your face,
I got a crush on you
That I Can't Escape...
Gazing into your sights
With my teenage Eyes,
I Burst with trepidation but Hide it with My Pride!
Running home before sundown,
To write in my secret Log, of a Boy, I could never have...
But only Adore in my DayDreams!
I got a Crush on you
And It's Killing me Softly...
I get nervous when you speak to me...
My Heart won't stop trembling...
In my mind, I'm like...
“Is he really talking to me?”
“OMG, I Can't Breathe.”
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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ha! this is super cute. it reads like a song.
So sweet and nostalgic :)
"killing me softly"- so beautiful! 🥰🥰🥰
This made me smile
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In the stillness of the night, I lie awake, consumed by plight. Memories of you flood my mind, Of a love that was once so kind. But now you're gone and I'm alone, Longing for a love I've never known. My heart is insatiable, can't get enough, Of the love we had, the tender touch. The pain of missing you is too great, A wound that refuses to abate. I search for solace in memories past, But the pain lingers, it's here to last. Oh, how I ache to hold you near, To feel your heartbeat, to wipe your tear. But now you're gone, and I'm left to cry, Wondering why, oh why, did our love have to die? I try to move on, to forget, But my heart won't let go, it's still beset. By a love that was once so strong, But now it's gone, it's just a sad love song.
Written from the heart, and it is very inspirational.
Such a sweet picture of an intense time in every life...young love.
Heart pounding, cheeks blushing red, Love's first crush, fills me with dread. Each line captures the thrill and fear, Of teenage love, oh so dear. Congratulations on Top Story!
Ahh, the secrets we swallow when nothing comes of it. Crushes can truly crush. Congrats!
I love the way you express yourself, Lonzo. In this you communicate so well the breathlessness we all experience with our crush & so allow us to identify with & participate in what you experience. Congrats on top story!
Cute stuff! Congrats on your latest Top Story!
This piece made me smile and I found it very relatable
Wow! The feeling of one's crush are so perfectly captured here. 😍 Wonderfully done and congrats on Top Story!! 😍😍
What an endearing snapshot of first romances. Well done and congratulations on your Top Story!
Congratulations on Top Story!
Wonderful words of love, Congrats.
Crushed Hard! 😊