No one notices marshmallows, at least that's what we thought
The bag seems always full
Unless one might get caught
Unlike chewing gum
Their messiness lasts much longer
Sugary, plumply goodness stolen from down under.
Sneaky snacks are so delightful,
the joy is in the stealing,
no kid wants an apple, especially in it's peeling.
Tucked away for baking maybe once a year,
no one knows they're missing,
'til the bag is nearly cleared.
Yikes! Mom's thumbing through recipes, then loudly she proclaims,
"perhaps a Jell-O mould, it's nice to have a change!"
"I'll throw in some marshmallows." our faces turn quite sallow.
Counting out my pennies, a few nickels and a dime,
I shout out, "I want cookies" and check the clock for time.
"What's the hurry kiddo, you look like you've seen a ghost, you barely
drank your milk or finished up your toast?"
Is she really onto me and my sneaky snacks, or am I having what
some might call a full on snack attack?
Do I go to the mini mart and try to buy
Some more (so' more's?), or do I wait for the night to even out the score?
Perhaps I should get it over, dramatically confess?
I watch her close the cookbook, her mind made up I guess.
"I think I'll make banana bread, it's better for our guests."
Now free to ride my bike, and wile away my hours, Sneaky Snacks runs
back as her guilt has super powers. "I ate all the marshmallows!" yet she
doesn't even blink, she's washing dishes at the kitchen sink.
Sneaky Snacks felt so funny when she snuck about at night
to take another 'mallow from that cupboard out of sight.
Creeping on all fours, shushing her dog who barks,
rolling on the carpet with marshmallows after dark.
Her altar has now been shattered, the mischief gone un-noted,
there's no life for sneaky snacks if she isn't even gloating.
What can I do to feel the thrill, to make it all seem daring?
I ate a bag of marshmallows without Mom even caring!
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Comments (18)
Oh Rock, so much fun this poem
Entertaining and fun!!! Love how you ending this one!!!💕❤️❤️
XD Heh. Something me and my brothers would do, too.
Wonderful poem
Mmmm squishy sweet mallows goodness!!
Hahahahaha this made me chuckle! I loveeeeee marshmallows and your poem!
Oooo, you & my older brother, experts at the finding & sneaking game. That is, until mom hid the goodies high up in the built-in cabinets in the family room & he didn't bother to dust off the footprints he left in the dust.
Funny
Yummy
Hahahaha I always found all the chocolate. One time mom made cookies for some friends coming and froze them. When she went to thaw them half were gone! My husband loves marshmallows… great job on this poem - funny and clever.
very fun poem
This is so cute! I was always sneaking into my mum's baking cupboard as a kid, too, but sadly we rarely had marshmallows. :(
This is just so good!
Another wonderful snack poem! You’re all conspiring to make me hungry. Guess I open the cupboard and eat some marshmallows.
Brilliantly hillarious! Love he joy and fun of this! 🤍
I absolutely love them
Oh my goodness, this is hilarious - last night I was laying in bed, helping my daughter get to sleep and I made up a random story about a village of marshmallows. Haha! 😂
S'more or less. But the whole bag. Check your A1C, ROCK. I enjoyed this.