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As
Breath
Catches,
Daisy’s
Eyes
Finally
Glance
Haltingly
Into
Jake’s.
Kiss?
Leaning,
Makeout quickly.
No-one
Observes,
Patrons
Quabble.
Red-faced
Smiles.
Tingling
Underneath
Vibrations.
Would an
X-Ray show this?
Yearning but also
Zen.
About the Creator
Joe O’Connor
New Zealander
English teacher
Short stories and poems📚
Please be honest- I would love your constructive feedback, as it's the only way I'll get better. Would rather it was pointed out so I can improve!
Currently writing James The Wonderer
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