Linger
For Hannah Moore's Yūgen - a Community Renga
homeward bound and yet
a song inside my heart aches
linger in this land
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Copyright © 04/12/2024 by Christy Munson. All rights reserved.
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Author's Notes: The brilliant mind of Vocal creator Hannah Moore inspired this Haiku. The Haiku stands on its own but was written to take its place in the Renga.
"Renga is a collaborative progressive poem ... join us! You just need to pick up where the last person left off, following an alternating format of 5,7,5 and then 7,7 syllable counts and linking your stanza to the last." -- Hannah Moore
Click the link to read the collaborative poem created thus far by Hannah Moore, John Cox, Teresa Renton, Rachel Deeming, Paul Stewart, Mike Singleton-Mikeydred, and me. Cannot wait to see what comes next!
Comments (6)
Oh wowwww, that middle line is my favourite! Loved your lines!
Very nice! Love the last line! Great stand alone and as part of the renga!
So incredibly lovely and poignant. Thank you for writing such great inspiration as I followed after you with my 7, 7 :)
It’s a familiar feeling for anyone who has travelled somewhere that has captured their heart:/ I like the wistful vibes here Christy😊
Love this part!
Ohhh.this is magical. Love the pull of the words and the feelings behind them, Christy. I also need to apologise...still not read your most recent Top Story. It's on my list...just letting you know lol.