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I was lost a bit, I know...
gone in
the fog and grit,
and snow.
And now,
I’m not sure what I have
come back to, babe.
*
But,
*
it can be so easy just
to cry and lose my wit, (but I)
do know that what we’re of is love (and not)
of hate, or hurt, or rage, or war, or jade that ends
in fit.
*
Cut
*
deep into my skin, you do…
you
won’t let me off the hook (I’m like)
a fish, and you
won’t let me sink,
or swim,
or wade in one more day with you.
*
Gut
*
the hope and vim out of me, baby -
save
only what you say
you gave me, I’ll
bow down to you
and beg you now
to stay and kiss and love me like
I know the fool in you
deep down does want
to do.
*
Just
*
eat up all
my life (much like)
the lion, like
the Leo that you are…
I know that it can feed your ego when
I weep and say, “don’t run away -
here is who and what we are.”
*
Oh,
*
and tell me now,
is this the way it has to be?
Is our love a nail or spar of jade -
are we amid a war of hurt
and scar and hate and rage?
Or have we only lost
the key to free us from
this box and from
this cage?
*
Is it
*
lust or is it love?
Is it rust or is it
gold that has been
lost in all the mud? We
sift the ruin set amid us,
have we
ever been a tale of
leaf and dove?
(Can we)
find just one kind act to fill our cup (now that we)
are on the bar and want
to jump?
*
Is it dust or is it love?
Can we
move past this wall amid us, will
you toss me just one bone or will you
tug and pull the rug?
*
I will set the past on fire, babe
I
will pay no mind to rust or jade.
For as I’ve told
I know it’s gold
of what we’re cast and have
been made.
*
For
to love you is a must,
and I know you need me and that this -
that we
are love and not just lust.
*
So,
let’s be free from jail,
my love -
let us make bail...
we are a tale
of leaf, and cure, and let, and be, and dove.
*
-Gina C. 🧚♀️✨
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Gina C.
Twice-published in Vocal's Moment of Freedom Collection:
Poet🧚♀️✨
Fantasy writer
Waterfall Rhymer
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Comments (7)
This was wondering through a Journey of Love 😍 ❤️💯📝😉❗
Lovely!!! Beautiful lines!!! Loving this!!❤️❤️💕
Oh my goodness! You potrayed the ups and downs of love so well! I loved the uncertainty throughout the poem and the clarity at the ending!
Truly amazing poetry. I can never write like you do, and I'm glad, because I get to read the fruits of your labor and stand in awe of it. Magnificent rhyming and pacing, the meter is sublime, and you seem to always capture magic. I relate so much to the message here, and I love that you incorporate the work it takes to succeed in a loving relationship. ❤️👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 I do hope this places!
Where were all these words when I was looking, lol?? You have the best use of vocabulary, my friend. This had such an amazing feel to it, my friend :)
This right here "Is our love a nail or spar of jade - are we amid a war of hurt and scar and hate and rage? Or have we only lost the key to free us from this box and from this cage?" Wonderful words. Well done, my friend.
Wow, Gina! I love the word choices you’ve made here! I’m still thinking about that rust and the gold in the mud… 🙂