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Just Great

an inverse poem about perspective

By Kiersten WeldonPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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Everything is just great

Don't try to convince me that

Every waking moment is a struggle and

Things won't ever get better

There is so much to be grateful for

Even if

I go days without sunlight

There is always a rainbow after a storm

And it's not true that

I will never get better

Because

If I just try harder

I will definitely cheer up

And don't you tell me that

I don't stand a chance

I have so much to live for

I have been told that

"It's all in my head" and

"This too shall pass" and

You will never hear me say

I am not okay

Mental Health
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About the Creator

Kiersten Weldon

My brain is where most of my stories go to die. Whatever survives will end up here. Eventually.

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  • Sasi Kalaabout a month ago

    Very well. Congrats!!

  • Jay Kantor2 months ago

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  • Apurba Deb2 months ago

    Such a lovely and inspirational poem.

  • PK Colleran2 months ago

    Excellent 👌

  • This was so optimistic when read top to bottom but so heartbreaking in reverse! You executed this perfectly! Congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Anna 2 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!!

  • The opposite reads of this poem make each one more powerful. Great piece!

  • Thought Markets2 months ago

    Such a lovely read.

  • Caroline Jane2 months ago

    Really well done! 🥰

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    180 degrees difference on this one. A well-deserved Top Story!

  • Matthew Fromm2 months ago

    Well deserving top story

  • highs and lows of life. I love this poem.

  • Tina D'Angelo2 months ago

    I'll see your upside down and raise you one lifelong chronic depression. Girl, I get you and will be searching out your work from now on!

  • Christy Munson2 months ago

    Congratulations on Top Story! I have friends struggling with mental health so this poem feels personal. Thank you for handling it with tenderness. I enjoyed reading it in both directions.

  • Jossy ibe 2 months ago

    Nice

  • olymoolla2 months ago

    You have written so many beautiful stories your story is admirable please visit my vocal id and read a story please

  • Oketta Andrew2 months ago

    good work keep it up

  • Congratulations on your top story . ❤️

  • Caroline Craven2 months ago

    This is so good. Excellent top story.

  • Manisha Dhalani2 months ago

    Congrats on top story!

  • Alexander Lawford2 months ago

    Thats very good poem

  • Fantastic! That really is a struggle of mental health and perception, one minute you’re feeling the way this poem reflects from top to bottom, but then you may feel down like when reading this poem backwards. I think it’s so common people can alternate between those two feelings. You do an excellent job with this!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    This poem is definitely great. Well done and congrats on the TS.

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