How to Write Your Name
A Gentle Love Poem
atop sun-warmed sheepskin,
static blurs your goose-down head.
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wiggle here on your back
testing balance, catch your feet.
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in the years before you know
the miles they traversed...
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count your toes, twine them
with curious, silky fingers
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and wonder at your heels,
smooth caps of untread feet.
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in the years before you trace
maps in the parchment of your soles.
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butterfly your knees near your ears,
form ‘oh’ and taste the tiny big toes.
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mama’s coos and your grin swirl
and mix giggle as she cups your feet.
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in the years before you count
the stamps they left in riverbeds.
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three months back, she inked
those tangelo soles pressed them
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in pages for you to remember.
so nuzzle mama’s cheek your
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warm peachy fuzz
into the hollow of her ear.
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moments like this fetter close,
an ache to the center of her heart
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and they will sit within a secret space
and she will always remember.
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in the years before you hold
the sun in your palms and remember
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this is when you wrote your name.
About the Creator
Mackenzie Davis
“When you are describing a shape, or sound, or tint, don’t state the matter plainly, but put it in a hint. And learn to look at all things with a sort of mental squint.” Lewis Carroll
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Copyright Mackenzie Davis.
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Comments (8)
Wonderful lyrics-ode to a love divine. Beautiful.
Wow! This is just gorgeous.
Wow! I love the repetition in this. You have captured the feelings of those moments so well.
This was heartwarmingly sweet. I loved 'in the years before you hold the sun in your palms'. So so gorgeous and filled with love and affection
Astoundingly beautiful, tender, sweet & so evocatively relatable.
Well now. This was beautiful, Mackenzie - so glad I came across this little piece!
Awww, this was extremely lovely and so beautifully written! It touched my heart!
Wow! This is such a stunning poem. Beautiful. 💓