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He's Not That Bad, Really

Though I may be biased

By Cathy holmesPublished about a month ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - October 2023
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Rob, I take you as

my awful wedded husband,

said the blushing bride.

***

True story. That was my former sister-in-law's vow to my brother on that fateful day many years ago. It was a small service, with the bride and groom, and some close family members. Of course, we all started giggling when she made that slip.

The officiant tried to reign us in so he could complete the ceremony, but wasn't very successful considering he was laughing as much as we were. I think the only person there who wasn't laughing was my brother. Oops!

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Daphsam17 days ago

    Hahahaha! That is so funny!

  • Grz Colmabout a month ago

    This made me chuckle! Thanks and I appreciated your recap at the end!! πŸ˜†

  • Lena Folkertabout a month ago

    I almost spat my coffee out. Fantastic! Of course, not for poor Rob πŸ˜…β€οΈ

  • Canuck Scriberabout a month ago

    That's a cute story.

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a month ago

    hahahahaha...this is great, congrats on getting top story

  • ThatWriterWomanabout a month ago

    Hahaha this gave me a good laugh! Thank you for sharing, Cathy!

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a month ago

    Well, as per her own words, Gerald may be awful but at least he's not terrible. If he was terrible, he would've been left at the altar. I hope she made it up to him since then.

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Wait, what - your FORMER SIL 🀣 loved it.

  • Abdullahabout a month ago

    Great job

  • Right up there with "Untied United Methodist Church" (or anything else with "United" in the name).

  • Lana V Lynxabout a month ago

    This is really funny.

  • Gerald Holmesabout a month ago

    This is funny as F**K and as true as death and taxes.

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a month ago

    Good one! Wow!! He may have saved himself some misery if he stopped it right then and there.πŸ˜‰ I thought I heard that at a wedding once. My husband at the time assured me it wasn't said. They are divorced too.

  • Tiffany Gordon about a month ago

    Great job!!!!

  • Mackenzie Davisabout a month ago

    Oh man! A proper snafu. I hope he found the humor eventually, though!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Back to say congratulations on your awful, sorry I meant lawful, no I meant laughable Senryu!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a month ago

    This is such a sweet poem/ story! Great work Cathy and congrats on Top Story!

  • The Dani Writerabout a month ago

    Awww man, that's priceless lols! Top Story Congrats!

  • Dana Crandellabout a month ago

    🀣🀣🀣 Priceless! Congratulations!

  • Naveedabout a month ago

    Congratulations on achieving top story status! ❀️

  • StoryholicFindsabout a month ago

    Love it! Congrats! ❀️

  • Cyrusabout a month ago

    Cute! Also, if you guys are interested in joining a community of writers, view my profile for more details!

  • Kageno Hoshinoabout a month ago

    Nice points

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a month ago

    Ahh, the ole Freudian slip! πŸ˜… congrats on your top story!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a month ago

    I love this very honest blunder lol great point to elevate the moment

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