Great Teller of Truths
A Sideways Ode to the Looking Glass
Looking past “me” was ordinary.
I wondered if a better land was just there
past hated arms and limp straw hair. This
was masochistic torture, to see myself
tantalizingly out of happiness’s light
stuck in a well of slimy (truths).
The sky shimmered pink clouds
tinged with gilded underside; or a meteor shower,
backdrop a navy ripple, silver moon
and jewel-blue teases—puddles where I stood.
The mirror’s wonderful secret was just there
so I pressed my face to the proverbial window, saw
a land opposite my own. It resonated,
frequency of want, of envy for its beauty
that I looked past “me” and clung to it
with eyes holding pleas of fear, sadness,
lacking. Eyes that wished a sultry depth anew.
That hazel is a parched moss—dying. And I saw
the mirror’s diamond world: my own reflection
nearer the vision of people from my land;
but not me, stuck on this side of wonderful.
If I stay here, still, unblinking, unfocused
could I discover it? (these years of dodging.)
The mirror has an answer: Oh, Teller of Truths.
At least, that’s what I hear, lessons from the wise
and weathered, those too occupied to stare just there
and wait for magic’s glisten. How do they know?
How does one know that time's gossamer
is a woven blanket, sewn by withered hands?
I will heed those words and curl ‘neath waiting.
Once, a flicker in my reflection
chased the truth of my land out and out,
like a freed moth to the belly of a hawk,
and so I glimpsed it, then;
And twice, a shadow moved in a black mirror,
and a black mirror reveals truths unfathomable,
so I watched, wary of revelation. Nothing
was still then. So thrice, I stand before liquid silver,
frozen, save for eyes and breath. So thrice, I stare,
willing stillness to open the secret wonderful.
So thrice I count the light, shadow, spirits,
wondering when I will see it (when will I see it?)
this endeavor toward the stare, repulsed,
gaping out of crystalline depths—me just there.
Oh, mirror, time has stolen me from me,
laid my soul bare upon your lap. Do you see it
whimpering as it meets your eye? I crave a blessing,
yet all I find is dry forest floor illuding comfort.
You say, I hold you in truth unacknowledged.
And I exist with a breath that pulses on your face
beating down the flush at being seen and known—
Unending is my own stare within your arms.
And as time gives me back a calm, fresh as wind,
I open wider. Oh, mirror, is that my soul,
laid bare upon my face? It is nothing in my periphery
just blur and this here, my own self at last –
and seen. It is a secret, I think,
that you have held in plain sight, or perhaps
shrouded in a mist of visions and tall-tales
of secret wonderful things; that in stillness,
the sages portend the ignorance of they who hide.
Oh, I see so much. You, Great Teller of Truths, who held me
in fragile grace, hidden as a flicker, a shadow,
years and my demands, and my tears over lies,
answering a whimper from wild, anguished thrashing.
You —
Here.
***
About the Creator
Mackenzie Davis
“When you are describing a shape, or sound, or tint, don’t state the matter plainly, but put it in a hint. And learn to look at all things with a sort of mental squint.” Lewis Carroll
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Comments (24)
A strange sense of presence the self can be! I came to this all too tardy, but it is truly magical and unsettling read, which means a great experience. ;) The "Learn to look at all things with a kind of mental squint" is demonstrated so beautifully in your poem. My favorite are these stanzas: The sky would shimmer pink clouds tinged gold underside, or a meteor shower backdrop a navy ripple, silver moon and jewel blue tease—puddles where I stood. The mirror’s wonderful secret was just *there* So I pressed my face to the proverbial window;
Congratulations. This is fantastic, I think I need to read it all again.
Well done and very deserving of the TS spot!
Awesome ✨ Congratulations 🎉 on Your Top Story💯❤️😉📝🎉
This is beautiful, Mackenzie. Love your train of thought here. Sideways indeed... what a fun way to travel through the looking glass. Great work and congrats on a worthy TS! 💙
WONDERFUL!! congratulations on top story
So poetic and beautifully written. A very well deserved Top Story
This is truly spectacular writing. Well beyond just good or great, Congrats on a well deserved Top Story.
Yeah... I must say your work is a top-notch
*sigh* this is good, good stuff. Well done, lovely words. ❤
Beautifully written. I enjoyed reading this very much. Congratulations on your well-deserved Top Story!
Congratulations on your top story. Very nice read!
What an epic story
Top Story, Indeed!!! Congratulations, my friend.
Brilliant & brilliantly written!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!❤️❤️💕
great and easy to read and understand
your words, your image - almost perfection!
I don't think it ever occurred to me that the mirror was showing more than where my eyes were focused. You've given me a whole new perspective. Excellent piece. Congrats on the TS.
This is a masterpiece. Like honestly, straight up a MASTA-PIECE! I will be back.
..."Oh, mirror, is that my soul, laid bare upon my face?" I'm speechless. I have no words. I love it.
As I mentioned to someone else just recently, the mirror only shows one perspective, one side, & only the outside of that. What we see is an entirely different matter. What you see, Mackenzie, I'm not quite sure, but I come to realize that as I reflect upon your writing I see different things in every line & stanza. Marvelously, entrancingly, enchantingly, invitingly, mesmerizingly well done.
This took my breath away and brought tears to my eyes. You are phenomenal!
Stunning, sad, heartbreaking even. How do you manage to do it - pull these masterpieces out? Fine work, Mackenzie, fine fine fine work!
Introspective and sad, such nostalgia in the words. The depths of the mirror hides and tells so much.