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Touch me like I’m her—
The girl that you really love.
Do it nice and slow…
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Well done
Well done an honest truth very powerful
Okay...this may take a while... ;)
Damn! This is powerful, and it can be interpreted so many ways, depending on the person looking at it—like an ink blot. I’ve legit asked someone this before. So this resonated with me hard. I knew I was a rebound, and he was my rebound. I wasn’t sad he didn’t love me. I wasn’t even emotionally available. I was ‘craving intimacy’ without all the effort of building and maintaining it, and just wanted to feel good for one night. So my interpretation of this poem is that it’s incredibly hot. Sex for the sake of sex, and the self awareness to know what she wants. Being 100% in the moment, not thinking about her future or past. Nice and slow to extend the ecstasy. Bravo! 👏🏼 Haikus truly are your thing.
Heartbreaking and scandalous! Loved it!
Ohhhh this reminds me of the song “glimpse of us” BIG FAN 💕
Who's being naughty now? And, 😮 This is so good. She doesn't care...just touch her! Well done!
Oh my! This is heartbreakingly beautiful, R.P.!
Aren’t we all!.. Nice one R.P ! ☺️👏
There’s longing, lust and a lot to like about this haiku! 👌🤍✨🕊️
Ouch! Excellent haiku, RP!
That really says a lot. Well done.
I like this a lot! Fantastic haiku!
Love this!