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Questions in Your Silence

Will you ever tell me why?

By J. Nicholas MerchenPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - June 2024

Will you ever tell me why?

Why? What do you mean—‘why’?

Why you did it—you owe me that.

Mom, I love you…

Why’d you say that?

Because— because— I do.

Don’t lie to me! You’re trying to change the subject!

Mom—

No! I want to know why!

It wasn’t you…

Then what? If you loved me, what could make you do this?

I bartered my soul for curiosity. And my body. And my brain. And my life.

…I could’ve helped you…

No—

I could have! If you let me!

Mom! Please…

…Why?

Because my life was little more than a deeply abasing conjugation of Hell!

But— was this the answer?

Mom?

Yes?

I love you.

I miss you.

Mom… I love you

…I know… And I love you…

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Comments (8)

  • Dr. Jason Benskin28 days ago

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  • Natasha Collazo28 days ago

    Profound and raw poem ! Congrats

  • Congrats on the Top Story. Painful poem but beautiful!

  • Congrats on top story!!!

  • Oh I got tears in my eyes, a child going through such an experience with their mom :/

  • Manisha Dhalani29 days ago

    Wow. Brilliant writing. Congrats on top story!

  • Joe Pattersonabout a month ago

    Love this.

  • Sweileh 888about a month ago

    Thank you for the interesting and delicious content. Follow my story now.

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