And then I saw you
in the low lights
of the Havana summer moon.
Heartbeats dropped like echoes
to my eardrums,
and percussions
resonated all my soul-throbs to your tune.
And I thought I
was dreaming;
nearly not believing
it was you;
feeling dizzied,
pleading kiss me
as I
was mystified by all the lustful fumes.
And that was when the earthquake hit me -
BOOM
…for my searching
(always searching)
spirit…
search it did no more, it knew -
that waiting there, beneath the low lights
it was always,
simply,
you.
*
And then I saw you
walking toward me
in the low lights of
the Cuban summer moon.
My soul burst clouds of fire
and as the sparks and flames grew higher,
they transpired and ensued…
electric waves that made
my heart begin to rush, and thump, and swoon.
Rush…
Rush…
rushing blood,
as the anticipation grew.
Pound…
Pound…
pounding thuds throughout me…
as you came closer into view.
And I thought I
was dreaming;
fireflies of life, beside me, beaming
on that Havana night in June.
And that was when the rainstorm hit me,
Pitter-patter BOOM
…for my soundless
(always soundless)
intuition…
soundless it simply stayed no more, it crooned -
that waiting there, beneath the low lights
it was always,
simply,
you.
*
And then I saw you
right before me
in the lowlights of the moon.
Without a word
you simply had me –
I lost my breath,
the way you grabbed me;
magnetic rays that made
my heart begin to bloom.
And oh, the butterflies,
the emblematic butterflies…
static flutters deep within me as I
looked into your eyes -
and that was when our two lost souls collided -
and all the emptiness inside me
instantly resided,
as I crashed into the essence that is you.
And I thought I
was dreaming -
my spirit felt alive, and gleaming -
rising up, like a balloon;
high into the highest sky and past the ceiling
you made me feel revived right then, and new.
And that was when the thunder hit me -
rumble, tumble, BOOM
…for my troubled
(always troubled)
sense of purpose…
troubled it simply was no more,
for my fate was all-consumed -
and waiting there, beneath the low lights
it dawned on me that it was always,
simply,
you.
*
And then I felt you
as you kissed me
underneath the low lights
of the big Havana moon.
And as your skin brushed up
against mine,
I lost all sense and track of the time;
tasting the life that I was meant for
on your tongue.
And as you held me through the hours -
our auras blossoming, like flowers -
you and I, the Earth and sky,
were one in perfect in tune.
And I know my life is fleeting
and that the years of me
(inescapably)
will one day fade into the blue;
as they…
rush, rush…
run into their pending doom and ending bloom
under the sun.
But in that moment as you held me
- all at once and suddenly -
I was forever young with you.
And as we stood there
in the low lights
of the blue Havana moon,
I was home with you right next to me
never having known you were the remedy
to the aimless wandering I’d lived through.
And then I heard you say to me
as you brushed my face and cradled me
“I’ve been waiting all my life for you.”
And that was when the pieces came together,
and the stones of all my armor turned to feathers,
because your timing could have never been too soon.
And I thought I
was dreaming;
for like a cobbler, life was seaming
brand new soles onto my worn and weathered shoes.
And that was when the lighting hit me,
1…2…3…4…. BOOM
…for my distant
(always distant)
dreams and wishes
distant they simply were no more, they were becoming true -
and waiting there, beneath the low lights
it was always,
simply,
you.
*
And then I held you
as you dipped me
in the low lights of
that endless summer moon.
Below the cape of all of heaven’s bodies
you rocked me back and forth, so softly
beside the starlit glow of the lagoon.
Overcome with love and wonder
I knew right then there was no other
with such purpose and with whom
I was meant to sail (in this life) through.
And as we rode the winding river
you leaned into me, and whispered,
“I want to fly away with you.”
And oh,
how I did,
too…
for passing through the flowing curtains
of the weeping willow trees;
it was those very words you told me
that nearly brought me to my knees -
for I had seen this very moment
in the fog and blurry of my dreams;
for only you…
darling you
seemed to speak the code of my heartstrings.
And as we drifted slowly
in the gentle rock of the canoe
we lifted up our lives together
for together, we’d grown wings.
And I thought I
was dreaming;
nearly not believing
all that I was seeing…
for I opened up my eyes and saw you
lying right beside me in my room.
And that was when the moment struck me -
as I was hit by the MONSOON
…for the flightless
(always flightless)
essence of my being
flightless it simply was no more, because here and now with you, it flew.
And waiting there, beneath the low lights
of that Havana summer moon,
I felt peace of mind and soul inside me, for I finally,
justifiably,
undeniably and truly knew...
that it was always,
simply,
{{*{ YOU }*}}
underneath the low lights
of that Havana moon in June. ✨🌙
-Gina C. 🧚♀️✨
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Gina C.
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Comments (12)
Brilliantly written!!! Love it!!!
I loved this
Beautiful! Soooo Romantic ❤️
I thought that I was singing a song. Quite lovely.
The title automatically made me think of "When the Lights Are Soft and Low" by Leon Redbone. And the whispy, soft and romantic atmosphere captures the vibe I feel from one of my favorite crooners (bonus: as I kept reading you actually used the word "croon"). Could it be fate?
What a lovely, dreamlike ballad! I could easily see this translate into a song. The rhythm is awesome!
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You did your job as a true poet; you made us feel your words and moved us into another place
This is fabulous. Really, really well done.
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I do love the form of this allowing us to fall through the dream with you
This is masterful writing. Truly one of the best things I have read on Vocal in a long time. Loved it.
Gorgeous! And I love your use of onomatopoeia (sp?) :)
So uplifting and inspiring. I love this. You are a wonderful poet.