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The Bible

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By Atomic HistorianPublished 10 months ago Updated 10 months ago 1 min read
The Bible
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In all fairness, the Bible is the only book of the trilogy I’ve read. Mostly because the beginning is a recap of the first. I have not read the third book, mainly because I wasn’t terribly impressed with the Bible. Lots of continuity errors. Also, the book clubs get weird.

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Comments (6)

  • M.2 months ago

    I was making the same joke with my friends lately - how comes there are so many sequels and expansions to this thing?

  • Leslie Writes5 months ago

    I laughed at the continuity error and book club lines too. Those are solid bits.

  • Hahahahahaha I laughed so much at continuity error and book club!

  • Cendrine Marrouat10 months ago

    Hilarious! Thank you!

  • As a man of the cloth..., I loved this!

  • Judey Kalchik 10 months ago

    Hmmmmmmm

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