Winter entered quietly
A breeze blowing
Across a field,
With the scent of snow
And change,
The news that sun would return
And bring fire to the world,
The cold would lift
But first it would be endured,
It gave warning of what was to come
News of the changing days
And the growing years,
Winters collected on skin
Like scars,
Leaving their marks upon the earth
And upon the psyche
As we gathered around our fires
Warming by the flames,
As words flowed
Recalling those who had left
And those we feared would be next,
Telling stories of younger days
When the winters held
Little effect for your bones
And maturing thoughts,
When winter was a word
And not something prepared for-
Winter’s arrival was marked
With the watching of the sun,
The observation of the moon
And the counting of the stars,
As we gathered knowledge
Of who we are,
Who were,
And who are becoming-
Winter came
And with it we learned our direction
And placed our faith
In the lengthening of days
And the return of our beloved sun.
Katrina Thornley is a nature poet. novelist, and freelance journalist that resides in Rhode Island. She has two poetry collections currently published, a novel, as well as a short story anthology. Her poetry collections "Arcadians: Lullaby in Nature" and "Arcadians: Wooden Mystics" were inspired by a local park and life in her small rural town. You can find them on Amazon now!
Also, be sure to give her a follow on Instagram (@seekatwrite).
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Katrina Thornley
Rhode Island based author and poetess with a love for nature and the written word. Works currently available include Arcadians: Lullaby in Nature, Arcadians: Wooden Mystics, 26 Brentwood Avenue & Other Tales, and Kings of Millburrow.
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Comments (17)
A beautiful poem-thank you.
Congratulations!
Congratulations!
This was great. Well done
A wonderful depiction of the solstice.
Sun would return and bring fire to the world. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece
Well written, beautiful description and a warming winter piece.
Beautiful 😌
Beautiful piece.
Nice.
Nice poem! I love the contrast between winter and fire
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Impressive!
Beautiful. Winter does bring so many reflective thoughts to the surface. Hearted and subscribed.
Wishing you a good solstice — this is lovely. Here’s to the lengthening of days…
This resonates so deeply with me - as I am experiencing my first winter in 9 years! I'm trying to embrace all that "wintering" is and took comfort in the solstice yesterday, and in the knowledge that the sun will indeed return. A beautifully written piece :)
Can I buy a copy to use with a photo I have?
I left RI for 40 years to escape its Winters (The Old Boy followed me.). "Telling stories of younger days..." is all I have now, As usual, I find this item very enjoyable, and I'll bet young and old will like it.