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Well Said

Ongoing Silence

By ROCK Published 3 months ago 1 min read
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Well Said
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One in two, seen, unseen; begotten holes, hearts rendering. Love, doubt, past memories. Failed words, broken communication, healing me, you healing wounds open ever, never, shall we, look again. Backwards, forward, present, Now. Listening, forgiving, mother's vowing, praying yet empty now resurrecting fertile bows.

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ROCK

Writing truth or fiction, feels as if I am stroking across a canvas, painting colourful words straight from my heart. I write from my old farmhouse in Sweden. *BLOGLINK

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  • Lamar Wiggins3 months ago

    Excellent! In such a short time you conveyed so much emotion! An effective use of words! Thank you for sharing!

  • Cathy holmes3 months ago

    Nicely done!

  • Andrea3 months ago

    Shall we look again...a short phrase that captures the courage of a Mother's love.

  • Loved this unique style. Beautiful prose

  • Novel Allen3 months ago

    So many tumbling emotions fighting to be first. Huga and heartsto ever forgiving. Short but so sadly bitter sweet.

  • This was so poignant and emotional! Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️

  • Hearts full of grace, arms ever open, always ready to forgive & be forgiven, no matter how long it takes.

  • Jazzy 3 months ago

    "praying yet empty" almost put me in tears, so well done

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