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Vision at the End

Mind’s Sigh

By Rowan Finley Published 5 days ago 1 min read
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The sadness felt like sink sand,

at the top of an hour glass.

Slowly, sliding down,

little by little, less sound could be heard.

A vision came into his mind,

it was of a field of blue flowers,

waving gently in the wind.

Three children ran down the hill,

they were laughing, freely and innocent.

Playfully, they started rolling,

down the hills, through the flowers.

The lovely vision ended.

The sand was now over his head.

There was silence.

He took his last breath,

as his foot lodged in the center

of the hour glass.

His fight was over.

His time had come.

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About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. Aspiring licensed mental health counselor. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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Comments (2)

  • shanmuga priya5 days ago

    It's a thought- provoking art ......which reflects the deepest mysteries of life and death....

  • Shirley Belk5 days ago

    That is sad. Life and memories...

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