to wither and bloom
#a tribute
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there is such a stunning eloquence
to the beginning of life,
newness, growth, the thirst for something more,
stretching and yawning from
one collection of molecules to the next,
differentiating themselves,
following an intricate map,
each destination beautifully unique
as they embark on a journey
fraught with highs and lows,
love and pain,
swells of unimaginable joy and sorrow
til that last heave of air pushes out,
that final beat of the heart resounds.
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there is a such a stunning silence
to the end of life.
it rings in the ears of those left behind
never quite fully fading.
the echoes join in a choir
of memories lost through time,
ever raising their voices in
harmony,
and we bear witness to the fruits
of this stardust hymn.
we see it.
in the sun shining brightly,
in moments of peace,
in the bloom of a flower
and in the shape of newborn skin,
the cycle of rebirth ushered in
on the sigh of ancient anthem.
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I wrote these lines in memory of my father-in-law, who's life came to a close early this morning. Only minutes after receiving the news, did we look up to see that this bloom (in the cover pic) had just opened. A little smile and hug from him :)
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Comments (34)
Congratulations on having your story featured as a top story on Vocal! This is a remarkable achievement, and it's clear why your work has received such recognition. Your storytelling is truly exceptional. The narrative was not only compelling but also beautifully crafted, holding my attention from start to finish. The way you developed the characters and plot was masterful, making the story both engaging and thought-provoking. Your unique voice and perspective shine through, setting your work apart. It’s evident that you poured a lot of passion and effort into this piece, and it has certainly paid off. I look forward to reading more of your incredible stories in the future. Keep up the fantastic work! Best regards, Dr. Jay
Love your writing Heather!!
💖Heather, you beautifully captured the circle of life in this poem honoring your father-in-law. Sending my condolences to you and your family.💕
Lots of thoughts and love sent to you Heather from me and my husband. This is a beautiful tribute, and I admire you for being able to write it during your period of grief.
A beautiful bloom to accompany your lovely tribute to your father in law. My sincere sympathies to you and your husband.
Gosh Heather. I’m so sorry for your loss. This was a phenomenal tribute to your father in law. So beautiful.
Congratulations on Top Story, and for so heartfelt a poem. This one is radiant through sadness.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
First off, I'm sorry for your loss. Prayers going out to you and your family. Second, this is stunning work. So clear and concise with an immaculate flow. Very worthy of sharing beyond Vocal. 💖
I’m so sorry for your loss of your father in law. A beautiful soul shines in your heart and your memories of him, and through this gorgeous poetry you created. You’re an artist!
Well described!
How you wrte something so beautiful in that moment is a wonderful tribute. A truly difficult time for you and our family. Our family sends our love to all of you.
So sorry for your loss...this is such a beautiful tribute <3
Not surprised this got Top Story, Congrats pal, but I know that doesn't really matter right now. Hope you and fam are doing alright. hugfin.
Beautiful. I’m sorry for your loss.
The circle of life is beautifully explored, capturing both the eloquence of beginnings and the profound silence of endings. The imagery of newness, growth, and differentiation creates a sense of wonder and anticipation. The connection between life's end and the beauty of existence is powerfully conveyed, reminding us to find solace and meaning in the cycles of nature. We‘re deeply moved by the poem. Loved it. And hope to read more of your work, thank you very much again for sharing this soul-to-soul journey that touched our hearts. Subscribed.
A wonderful way of honoring your father-in-law <3. My condolences to you and yours.
Wow, Heather. How beautiful. 'There is such a stunning silence to the end of life. It rings in the ears of those left behind' really touched me. I'm so sorry for your loss. ❤️
I am glad you can remember him in such a beautiful way
beautiful H2, ❤️
loved the stardust hymn!
Gloriously and eloquently expressed!!!💕❤️❤️ Condolences, my friend!!!
This is stunning, my friend. Such gorgeously-spun words! Oh my. I am so sorry for you family's loss! Thinking of you guys ❤️❤️
So sorry for your loss, Heather. This is a beautiful poem. Captures the significance of beginnings and ends so powerfully
Sorry 4 your loss... gorgeous, profound, poignant and inspiring...